Max Craps On About Writing: Originality
I mentioned earlier that I’m planning to talk a little about writing this year. Today I carry that threat through.
To those of you who couldn’t care less about this topic: my God, can you put aside your own selfish interests for five seconds? No, wait, I mean: sorry. But there are people out there interested in this. I know because whenever I post about it, I get emails of weeping gratitude. That’s hard to resist.
So to originality. I raise this because I think it’s reasonably common for unpublished (and underpublished) writers to think: “Man, the only way to make it as an author is to churn out predictable, formulaic crap. Nobody’s interested in publishing really original books.” Well, when I say this is a common attitude, I mean I used to hold it, and I assume everybody is like me. There I was in 1998, collecting rejection letters for Syrup, and the underlying message seemed to be that it wasn’t mainstream enough. And I couldn’t describe my own book; I couldn’t find the pithy couple of sentences that people seemed to want, that would make them say, “That sounds interesting,” instead of their eyes glazing over with confusion. I needed something like: “Terrorists hijack a submarine and ex-Special Forces agent Jack Fyre is the only man who can stop it.”
It’s tempting to believe that formulaic crap sells because there seems to be so much of it. But I now think you can look at a shelf full of Grisham novels or whatever and assume they’re all the same until you read them. Then you find some common elements, for sure, but much less than you thought. There is formula out there, but not much of it.
I reacted to my Syrup rejections by writing a standard, genre thriller. It was terrible. And I learned that you never improve anything by making it less original. It’s the opposite: the worst thing writing can be is not new.
I’m convinced this isn’t just me. I think everybody wants newness. Editors, agents, readers: we all want new plots, new ideas, new ways of looking at the world. Nobody wants to get twenty pages into a book and know where it’s going, or even feel too much like they’ve seen all this before. Even within a genre’s iron-clad conventions, we want twists, surprises, and reinventions.
Young writers in particular can sometimes try to crawl inside a pre-conceived box labeled “novel” or “screenplay,” and end up with something far less interesting than if they’d forged their own path. I’m not saying you want to hit the other extreme, and pursue a lone, bizarre vision with no regard for how it reads. But you must nurture the things that make your story and your writing unique—that make you unique, since writing is letting people crawl around inside your head. Billions of people can write a sentence. Why should I bother reading yours, unless they’re different?
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Dan (#3126)
Location: New York City-ish
Quote: "The main thing about Van Gogh is that he painted pictures that astonished him with their importance, even though nobody else thought they were worth a damn. --Kilgore Trout"
Posted: 6180 days ago
--imagined agent response
How many rejections did you get on Syrup? When I read Syrup I thought it was totally pop--it's mind-boggling to me that someone could read it without thinking it could have some sort of mass appeal.
You should post your hook/query. :o)
Max
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Posted: 6180 days ago
Max
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6180 days ago
kitty (#1326)
Location: Upstate NY
Quote: "sweet"
Posted: 6180 days ago
Maybe I should scour your archives for that subject.
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Marleen (#2741)
Location: Canada
Posted: 6180 days ago
Maureen Ryan (#2265)
Location: East Cleveland, OH
Quote: "Truth is just an excuse for a lack of imagination"
Posted: 6180 days ago
shabooty (#637)
Location: D.C./V.A/M.D.
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Posted: 6180 days ago
DIRTYYY DIAPERS!!!
austin (#2462)
Location: rhode island
Quote: "hmmm...bleh..."
Posted: 6179 days ago
That should definately be one of the century's best quotes.
Narflz (#2594)
Location: St. Louis
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Posted: 6179 days ago
Rod McBride (#688)
Location: Gardner, KS
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Posted: 6179 days ago
Elmore Leonard has addressed the Crime thing, so my bank robbery plot is superfluous to the literature. Don DeLillo has documented American life in its absurd particulars beyond my wildest ambitions. Chuck Palahniuk has explored the subversive impulse to wit's end.
A six fingered man is only original if you ignore the Princess Bride, Hannibal Lechter, etc. But what if Craig Clevenger folded his cards after reading a Thomas Harris novel?
I'm familiar with all the doubts the unpublished have because I'm one of them. I've even toyed with self publishing out of a desperate fear of turning my baby over to an indifferent marketplace. It's comforting to know I'm not alone, but maybe a bit appalling as well. It means my fear of the industry is unoriginal.
Andrea (#2583)
Location: New York City
Quote: "I Hate My Job"
Posted: 6178 days ago
I like how you had a hard time describing Syrup. I thought I was the only one with this difficulty but youre right, its about getting a compact blurb. And some things just dont distill that easy. I dont know. Im dismayed but I had to write this crazy novel of mine the way it had to be written so what can I do except continue down the long road of rejection and hope someone gets it.
I love your writing.
Rock on!
Andrea DeAngelis
Michael Ricksand (#2212)
Location: Terra
Quote: "You do not have a right to be stupid."
Posted: 6176 days ago
Jeffrey (#2286)
Location: Right here
Quote: "Mathematics is a powerful language. Just look at how mathematicians destroyed the housing market."
Posted: 6172 days ago
Philippe Bolay (#3142)
Location: Sweden
Quote: "Quotes are great for hiding mediocrity"
Posted: 6168 days ago
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