Syrup & the Rise of the Belly
So I’m almost finished writing the first draft of the Syrup
screenplay. I did mention I was working on that, right? No? Oh. That’s
weird. I thought I did. Maybe you just forgot I told you. Yeah, I bet
that’s it.
Actually what happened is I was waiting until there was a signed deal before I announced it—since until there’s a bit of paper, there’s always the chance that an agreement will fall apart. But that took so long to get finalized that I just started writing. Now I have 90% of a first draft, and the bit of paper is on its way from Fortress to me.
Working on the script has been an amazing experience. I wrote Syrup (the novel) in 1997, and eight years later I get to go back and fix the parts I wish I’d done differently. I still feel very close to the two main characters, Scat and 6, and I love being able to play with them again. Then there’s the challenge of deciding which parts of the story should make it to the screen and which should be left on paper. I’ve never had to confront that before, and it’s been fascinating.
I also have a hard deadline, in the shape of Jen’s ballooning belly. Once those contractions hit I don’t expect to touch a keyboard for a couple of weeks, so my draft had better be finished by then. I’ve been working pretty intensely for a while now, which is probably why these blogs have been a little less frequent than usual. (You noticed, right? Come on.)
I wish I could post some of my script here, because, well, I’m damn excited about it. But I’m not allowed to. So I guess you’ll just have to take my word for it: it’s going really well, and I’m loving it.
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Coolet (#37)
Location: Goshen, Indiana
Quote: "Man who goes to bed with itchy bum, wakes up with smelly finger."
Posted: 7236 days ago
SCURVIES!
Deb Cupples (#489)
Location: Colorado Springs, CO
Quote: "Deb finds cool stuff"
Posted: 7236 days ago
Tim Ashwood (#595)
Location: Sydney
Posted: 7236 days ago
Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha <insane laughter, wipes tears from eyes>.
No, but seriously, weeks?
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
Narain (#824)
Location: Los Angeles, right between civilization and a desert
Quote: "NI!"
Posted: 7236 days ago
Peter N.Bernath (#1041)
Location: Stockholm - Sweden
Quote: "Errr... Is that a tree growing out of your head? - Fallout 2"
Posted: 7236 days ago
// Desperately waiting for Company... //
Andrew (#1279)
Location: Texas
Posted: 7236 days ago
ARghh when do you think it might come out?
Gregor (#1182)
Location: Toronto
Quote: "The righteous man is beset on all sides by the tyrannies of evil men."
Posted: 7235 days ago
A couple of weeks.
We all have to laugh at your perfectly normal naivety.
You'll be inspired mostly to create stories about sleep deprivation, olympic record diaper changes, and how protective you will begin to feel. I say inspired, you wont actually have the energy to write though until normalcy resumes. Get it all done now.
OverlordBill (#1197)
Location: ~2B, -4B
Posted: 7235 days ago
At least that's the story. Thankfully I was too young to remember it for myself.
Oh. And there's the story of how I had explosive diarrhea one day while my mother was changing me. She says it was all over her hands, on her clothes, in her hair, on the wall, on the floor, on the dog, you get the picture. Watch out for that.
You know, I wonder if I should see a psychologist about all of that...
JacksSmirkingRevenge (#1324)
Location: That place where Billy Elliot was comitted, England
Quote: "What can the harvest hope for if not for the care of the reaper man?"
Posted: 7235 days ago
shabooty (#637)
Location: D.C./V.A/M.D.
Quote: "I will shake your foundation. I will shake the f**cking rafters. Nobody'll be the same -Danny Bonaduce ....& go visit my blog @: http://www.shabooty.com"
Posted: 7235 days ago
you are going to star in and direct it too? :)
and let me guess you are going to be jen's midwife, eh?
you multifaceted mo fo (:
(I mean that in a good way)
Hobbie (#1359)
Location: Cornwall, England
Quote: "There was a little man in his hair!"
Posted: 7235 days ago
Still, it would be pretty cool if you get to cameo in any movie Max. Maybe just pop up at random like Peter Jackson is fond of doing, then spend the entire DVD commentary yakking on and on about the 2 and a quarter seconds of screen time you have.
Jonah (#1462)
Location: Morristown, Indiana
Quote: "That little story your writing... with the developing plot... and the antagonist..."
Posted: 7235 days ago
Location: Davis, CA
Posted: 7234 days ago
We don't do sheep (#1497)
Location: 919 miles away fom the Aussies "New Zealand"
Quote: "I'm the Jesus Of Suburbia"
Posted: 7234 days ago
Yenzo (#829)
Location: Secret underwater pyramid base in the Pacific
Quote: "In order to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe (Carl Sagan)"
Posted: 7233 days ago
Looking forward to the first pic of your kid, Max... have fun. And throw away all the books about babies.
mark henderson (#1502)
Location: uk
Quote: "pah"
Posted: 7232 days ago
see:
http://www.hungryyears.com/
Hobbie (#1359)
Location: Cornwall, England
Quote: "There was a little man in his hair!"
Posted: 7231 days ago
poeticallybored (#158)
Location: Gainesville, FL
Quote: "My lack of self-maintnence is the closest thing I have to self-deprecation."
Posted: 7228 days ago
I had trouble falling asleep last night, so at 4:00 AM I started to read it. No matter how interesting a book, eyes shirting over text at the wee hours of the morning puts me to sleep.
But... I didn't fall asleep. It's a little after 9:30 AM and I just finished the book. It was really great, and now I can't wait for the movie.
Posting this message is the second thing I did after finishing the book a little bit ago. The first time I did after finishing it was write to a friend doing a marketing internship, warning her not to become a twisted fuck.
Budda (#1535)
Location: The Sky
Quote: ""i once had the key to life, but i lost it with my innocence.""
Posted: 7218 days ago
Jennifer (#1643)
Posted: 7152 days ago
Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 7136 days ago
So now I'm up to date with the Barry backlist and looking forward to Company -- as soon as it hits the second-hand bookshops (nah, just kidding).
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