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“Don’t get me wrong,” said the Manager. “I don’t want to denigrate your contribution.” He smiled. I did not feel reassured. I felt locked up. My brain was trying to remodel the last two months in order to fit new input: these in-house test subjects… we’ve already begun. It was drawing resources away from other functions. I was hanging. “But I’d be a fool to ignore the commercial possibilities. And I hope I’m not a fool.” He smiled again.

“The thing is, Charlie, they’re not really your parts,” said Cassandra Cautery, from somewhere behind me. “They’re the company’s.”

The Manager chuckled. “Nobody’s talking about taking away your parts.” His eyes moved at Cassandra Cautery, and she closed her mouth with an audible click. “As long as Dr. Neumann remains a valuable member of Better Future, he can have all the parts he wants.”

“Of course. That’s what I—”

“What Cassie means is that the time has passed when you were this company’s only design-capable employee. That’s a credit to you, by the way. You should be proud of the way your people have picked up your skills and knowledge. It means we can move you into an area even better suited to your unique skills and experience.”

My brain said: Lola has an Augmentation. That was all it had so far. It was still trying to figure out why she hadn’t told me about it. Did Lola not trust me? How could she talk to the company and not me?

“Our first test subjects… well, they experienced some issues,” said the Manager. His tie matched the drapes. I wondered if that could be coincidence. “Post-traumatic stresses. Psychotic breaks. That kind of thing. It was a real surprise, since you hadn’t demonstrated any such symptoms. It got us thinking about the psychology. And what we decided is that you, Dr. Neumann, would be absolutely terrific at guiding these people through the recovery process. I mean, look at you! You’re inspiring. You could work wonders assisting our test subjects adjust to life with an Augmentation.” Behind him, the sun moved behind a cloud. “Especially… well, that particular test subject who doesn’t know she has one.”

Because the logical part of my brain was occupied, it did nothing to stop the raw, instinctive jolt of rage that burst through my body. That’s my explanation, anyway, for why my Contours twitched, and I kicked the Manager through the window.

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Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature"
Posted: 6311 days ago

Great last sentence, once again.

"I guess that's a no to the new job offer then?" :)

Machine Man subscriber Impotent Verse (#3907)

Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 6311 days ago

Aghhh! And now I am going on Holiday for 1-week to a little cabin in the woods, by a lake, in the South of Finland, with no running water, electricity or plumbing and no cellphone coverage.

I'll have to wait a whole week to find out how this particular Friffhanger is resolved!

Machine Man subscriber Wiz (#3990)

Posted: 6311 days ago

Too bad about the Manager -- I guess they can always rebuild him. (If he doesn't already have a few Augmentations of his own...looks like he's already unencumbered by a VMPFC or maybe he was just born that way).

Machine Man subscriber Electrichead (#3898)

Location: Toronto
Posted: 6311 days ago

Love it! But if he survives the fall, I am sure he's going to armour himself up since he's going to be out for a while anyway.

Machine Man subscriber Stuk (#4278)

Location: UK
Posted: 6311 days ago

Haha! Fantastic!

I've absolutely loved this week's pages Max. A mini-cliffhanger every day!

Machine Man subscriber Mapuche (#1184)

Location: Darwin, Australia
Quote: "Inconceivable!"
Posted: 6311 days ago

Ah Max - you've done it yet again. Just love that last sentence!

Machine Man subscriber Ballotonia (#4030)

Location: Netherlands
Quote: "Vote Early, Vote Often"
Posted: 6311 days ago

Wow, indeed great last sentence.

I disagree the manager would be augmented too though. As long as it's in a test phase, others will have to do it first to show it's safe. Perhaps I'm used to risk-averse managers, but I think folks like Richard Branson and Steve Fossett are the exception. How would a manager explain some heavy bulgy augmentation to friends at an expensive cocktail party? And ofcourse his trophy-wife would complain (wonder if The Manager was married, and how she'd respond to what happened?)

Also, since Lola knows about her heart being artificial, this begs the question which other part she doesn't know about is also artificial.

Ballotonia

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6311 days ago

Glad you liked it! But I have GOT to stop writing such long pages...

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#4313)

Posted: 6311 days ago

Wow.

Machine Man subscriber Jeff (#787)

Location: Berlin, Deutschland
Quote: "Give a man a match and he'll stay warm for the rest of the day; Set a man on fire and he'll stay warm for the rest of his life."
Posted: 6311 days ago

I love it! Way to go Charlie!

And don't stop writing long pages. This is a great story and should be developed to the fullest.

Machine Man subscriber C Leffelman (#3968)

Location: IL
Quote: "You can only be young once. But you can always be immature. - Dave Barry "
Posted: 6311 days ago

AHHHH, why on a Friday, why?!?! :D

Machine Man subscriber Ashley (#4002)

Location: Denver
Posted: 6311 days ago

Awesome! Didn't the manager know the capabilites of the prosthetics? I'm suprised he wanted to give him the news in person.

Machine Man subscriber JD (#4153)

Location: Savoy
Quote: "Pants?"
Posted: 6311 days ago

Oh no he dihduhnt!

I've got to agree with the other above me though: The Manager seems that he is necessarily both too savvy and too aware of the side-effects inherent in the augmentations to not have been prepared for this kind of outburst.

But why, oh why, does his tie match the drapes?

Machine Man subscriber Bob (#4095)

Location: Kansas
Quote: "Freeze!!! This is the Government!!"
Posted: 6311 days ago

I think its because he's neurotic enough to have the drapes changed every day to match his tie, possibly...

Machine Man subscriber dabbeljuh (#4114)

Posted: 6311 days ago

great page!

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6311 days ago

@Max: No you dont. BTW I read that last line and laughed for five minutes, out loud, head thrown back, laughing.

This is one of my favorite pages so far lol.

@JD: I agree. The manager seems too feared, too mystical within his company too be foolish enough to be without a plan should it not go smoothly. And also incorrect, Charlie seems to have put some AI in the equipment that is acting on its own when it believes it should do so. Like an employee who can be trusted to work alone for the good of the company with only the slightest push from management, who you then discover is a serial killer. PTSD nothing, these people don't know about that aspect, they are at the whim of their legs/arms/etc.

Machine Man subscriber Stygian Emperor (#2947)

Location: the Stygian Empire
Quote: "Flesh is a design flaw."
Posted: 6310 days ago

You should watch the Wallace and Gromit short "The Wrong Trousers," in which Wallace gets robotic pants that walk for him and are remote-controlled. Hilarity ensues.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Wrong_Trousers

Machine Man subscriber Chemical Rascal (#3964)

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "Don't read this. It's not relevant to anything. Go away."
Posted: 6310 days ago

That's some twitch.

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6310 days ago

made me laugh.
hard.
exactly what i needed after a long day at work

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6310 days ago

and 2 random thoughts: why does max not have a user number? and are Alex and I the only 2 with 3-digit usernumbers?

Machine Man subscriber Shola Gordon (#3902)

Location: London, United Kingdom
Quote: "We are all history's middle children."
Posted: 6309 days ago

I liked the manager. :( MAX!

Machine Man subscriber Chemical Rascal (#3964)

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "Don't read this. It's not relevant to anything. Go away."
Posted: 6308 days ago

gStein: If you saw Max's user number, your head would implode.

As for the three-digit user numbers, chances are, you're the only two that comment. Or something.

I wouldn't be surprised if there were people with one-digit user numbers out there.

Machine Man subscriber Neville (#4168)

Location: malta
Quote: "Happy Christmas"
Posted: 6270 days ago

OMG this was awesome! I loved this page..especially how it ended - I was shocked for 2 seconds and than I burst out laughing. And it's just the right lenght, Max..It's not too long :) don't worry about that :P

Machine Man subscriber Neville (#4168)

Location: malta
Quote: "Happy Christmas"
Posted: 6270 days ago

BTW I loved "His eyes moved over to Cassandra and her mouth closed with an audible click" and the fact that when the bad news was about to hit, a cloud moved in front of the sun behind the Manager's window - great use of pathetic fallacy

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