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Machine Man (serial)
“Don’t get me wrong,” said the Manager. “I don’t want to denigrate your contribution.” He smiled. I did not feel reassured. I felt locked up. My brain was trying to remodel the last two months in order to fit new input: these in-house test subjects… we’ve already begun. It was drawing resources away from other functions. I was hanging. “But I’d be a fool to ignore the commercial possibilities. And I hope I’m not a fool.” He smiled again.
“The thing is, Charlie, they’re not really your parts,” said Cassandra Cautery, from somewhere behind me. “They’re the company’s.”
The Manager chuckled. “Nobody’s talking about taking away your parts.” His eyes moved at Cassandra Cautery, and she closed her mouth with an audible click. “As long as Dr. Neumann remains a valuable member of Better Future, he can have all the parts he wants.”
“Of course. That’s what I—”
“What Cassie means is that the time has passed when you were this company’s only design-capable employee. That’s a credit to you, by the way. You should be proud of the way your people have picked up your skills and knowledge. It means we can move you into an area even better suited to your unique skills and experience.”
My brain said: Lola has an Augmentation. That was all it had so far. It was still trying to figure out why she hadn’t told me about it. Did Lola not trust me? How could she talk to the company and not me?
“Our first test subjects… well, they experienced some issues,” said the Manager. His tie matched the drapes. I wondered if that could be coincidence. “Post-traumatic stresses. Psychotic breaks. That kind of thing. It was a real surprise, since you hadn’t demonstrated any such symptoms. It got us thinking about the psychology. And what we decided is that you, Dr. Neumann, would be absolutely terrific at guiding these people through the recovery process. I mean, look at you! You’re inspiring. You could work wonders assisting our test subjects adjust to life with an Augmentation.” Behind him, the sun moved behind a cloud. “Especially… well, that particular test subject who doesn’t know she has one.”
Because the logical part of my brain was occupied, it did nothing to stop the raw, instinctive jolt of rage that burst through my body. That’s my explanation, anyway, for why my Contours twitched, and I kicked the Manager through the window.





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Posted: 6311 days ago
"I guess that's a no to the new job offer then?" :)
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Posted: 6311 days ago
I'll have to wait a whole week to find out how this particular Friffhanger is resolved!
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I've absolutely loved this week's pages Max. A mini-cliffhanger every day!
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Posted: 6311 days ago
I disagree the manager would be augmented too though. As long as it's in a test phase, others will have to do it first to show it's safe. Perhaps I'm used to risk-averse managers, but I think folks like Richard Branson and Steve Fossett are the exception. How would a manager explain some heavy bulgy augmentation to friends at an expensive cocktail party? And ofcourse his trophy-wife would complain (wonder if The Manager was married, and how she'd respond to what happened?)
Also, since Lola knows about her heart being artificial, this begs the question which other part she doesn't know about is also artificial.
Ballotonia
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Location: Berlin, Deutschland
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Posted: 6311 days ago
And don't stop writing long pages. This is a great story and should be developed to the fullest.
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Posted: 6311 days ago
I've got to agree with the other above me though: The Manager seems that he is necessarily both too savvy and too aware of the side-effects inherent in the augmentations to not have been prepared for this kind of outburst.
But why, oh why, does his tie match the drapes?
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Posted: 6311 days ago
This is one of my favorite pages so far lol.
@JD: I agree. The manager seems too feared, too mystical within his company too be foolish enough to be without a plan should it not go smoothly. And also incorrect, Charlie seems to have put some AI in the equipment that is acting on its own when it believes it should do so. Like an employee who can be trusted to work alone for the good of the company with only the slightest push from management, who you then discover is a serial killer. PTSD nothing, these people don't know about that aspect, they are at the whim of their legs/arms/etc.
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Posted: 6310 days ago
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Wrong_Trousers
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Posted: 6310 days ago
hard.
exactly what i needed after a long day at work
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As for the three-digit user numbers, chances are, you're the only two that comment. Or something.
I wouldn't be surprised if there were people with one-digit user numbers out there.
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