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Machine Man (serial)
CHAPTER TWO
One morning I woke to find a short woman sitting at the foot of my hospital bed. She wore a green suit with large buttons. A thick black folder lay in her lap. Her hair was neat and straight and corporate. She was a lawyer.
“Hey, you.” She smiled sympathetically. “Feeling better?”
“Uh… yes.” I noticed a tiny black box in her hand, with a blinking red light.
“I’m recording our conversation, remember?”
“I just woke up.”
“You were awake when I notified you, I’m sure. It was right before you said you felt on the path to a full recovery.”
I sat up. “Are you from the company?”
“Yes. I’m Cassandra Cautery.” She smiled. Her teeth were like needles. Or maybe that was the painkillers. I was on a lot of drugs. “I’m here to help.”
“I’m not going to sue.”
She glanced at her black box. “You just confirmed that you decline to take legal action against Better Future, is that correct?”
“Wait.” My brain was beginning to work. “Now I’m not sure.”
Cassandra Cautery rose from the bed. Her face was blank and terrible. She came closer until her face blotted out the world and her hair dangled above my cheek. Her breath smelled of cinnamon and betrayal. “Are you trying to threaten me?”
“What? No.”
“Hinting at legal action following a commitment to desist from same is actionable. Did you know that?”
I didn’t even know what that meant. “No.”
“Who’s advising you? Seddon?”
“I don’t know any Seddon.”
She exhaled. It was like a summer breeze, from somewhere evil. “This isn’t over.” She tucked her folder under her arm and walked out. Her skirt was very snug.
I realized I was holding my breath. I felt shaky and close to tears. I had never been in love before.
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Location: England
Quote: "Eagerly awaiting the European Tour."
Posted: 5110 days ago
Thomas (#1221)
Location: Germany
Quote: "One more, and I'm going to consider you my penpal."
Posted: 5110 days ago
I hope that evil pin teeth thing returns for more rollercoasting.
Location: Kansas City, USA
Posted: 5110 days ago
Noble Brown (#2407)
Location: Washington , DC
Quote: "Those that can't criticize"
Posted: 5110 days ago
towr (#1914)
Location: Netherlands
Posted: 5110 days ago
Yes, you've become an adjective.
Ajna (#3795)
Location: USA
Quote: "Judge if you want. We are all going to die one day. I intend to deserve it."
Posted: 5110 days ago
Jeffers0n (#3865)
Location: Maryland, USA
Posted: 5110 days ago
Erin (#1481)
Location: Seattle
Quote: "Living is easy with eyes closed"
Posted: 5110 days ago
I love your stories, but you seem to have fallen into another pattern.
Jennifer Gniadecki (#3308)
Location: Chicago-ish
Quote: "Happier than you and dragging you along for the ride"
Posted: 5109 days ago
Only because it turns into a cliffhanger in a serial, which gives it way more power than I think it should have.
I don't know if I'm supposed to be waiting for more leg info, laywer info, or love info. I like to know what I'm anticipating :) (of course I read books in a day because I can't stand putting them down so this format is a rather uncomfortable process for me right out of the gate!)
Unqualified picking aside - I like the story so far and if I could just go to amazon and buy the book to stop with the page a day thing - I'd do it in a heartbeat. It's like water torture.
Hazran (#946)
Location: UK (bottom bit)
Quote: "Only smoke when on fire."
Posted: 5109 days ago
Michael (#3884)
Location: Here
Quote: "Wait, what?"
Posted: 5109 days ago
But hey, it's only the fourth "page!" Can't wait to read more!
Location: Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA
Quote: "When I read about the evils of drinking, I gave up reading."
Posted: 5109 days ago
in cube land,
talking forklift parts,
this story,
it's like a cool breeze,
blowing on pyramid builders.
thankyou.
Best
Monday
Ever
Cautery....like Cauterize....you are one clever fracker Max.
Amber (#3671)
Location: Oregon, U.S.A
Posted: 5109 days ago
The woman seems very scary though, our hero falling for her like that hints more at how interesting a character he must be than it tells about her actually.
This whole page a day thing is pretty awesome.
Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 5109 days ago
Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 5109 days ago
Angelina Jolie? No way, she's got the "mothering the world" thing way too bad to be attractive any more. Too many kids, and tats...
Jared Squared (#3446)
Location: Boulder, CO
Quote: ""Never turned my back on society, society turned its back on me.""
Posted: 5109 days ago
Ted Kern (#3864)
Location: Las Vegas
Quote: "The problem facing the world today is stupidity. I'm not saying to kill the idiots off, just take the safety labels off everything and let the problem fix itself."
Posted: 5109 days ago
MYOB (#3892)
Posted: 5107 days ago
Location: chattanooga, TN, USA
Quote: """
Posted: 5106 days ago
Thick black folder, eh? Like Six's but more on the thick and less on the big, right? You know we're not going to let you get away with anything, right?
Is this taking place in the not too distant future? It has a futuristic feel but I can't put my finger on why. Maybe it's a futuristic version of present day.
John Williams (#3899)
Location: colorado
Quote: "[email protected]"
Posted: 5105 days ago
Gustav Bertram (#3906)
Location: Johannesburg, South Africa
Quote: "Eschew Obfuscation"
Posted: 5102 days ago
Or
"You were awake when I notified you, I'm sure. It was right before you said you [were] on the path to a full recovery."
Michael Ricksand (#2212)
Location: Terra
Quote: "You do not have a right to be stupid."
Posted: 5089 days ago
Location: Ravena, NY
Quote: "I could write a book about being lazy. I just don't feel like it."
Posted: 5009 days ago
Brilliant line.
Location: Portland, OR
Quote: "It is difficult to get a man to understand something when his job depends on not understanding it. --Upton Sinclair"
Posted: 5002 days ago
I know exactly what that smells like. Spot on Max!
Location: Peterborough, ON, Canada
Quote: "Soylent Green is people."
Posted: 4851 days ago
Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 4847 days ago
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