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Machine Man (serial)
I am not a people person. I don’t know why. Maybe you can figure it out and let me know. All I know is any time I’m evaluated, I score very low on social metrics. Also, if there is a party, I’m not invited. Or if I am, the people I’m seated between will both talk to the person on their other side. There’s something about me that is repulsive. I don’t mean disgusting. I mean like magnets. The closer people get to me, the stronger their urge to move away.
I am a smart guy. I recycle. Once I found a lost cat in the city and caught it and took it to the cat home. Sometimes I make jokes. I can tell what’s wrong with your car just by listening to it. I think women are beautiful and can do anything they put their minds to. I like kids, except the ones who are rude to adults and the parents just stand there, smiling. I have a steady job. I own my own apartment. I don’t lie. These are qualities I keep hearing that people like. I can only think there must be some other ingredient no-one is letting on, something vital, because I have no friends, am estranged from my family, and haven’t dated this decade. There is a guy in Lab Control who once killed a woman with his car, and he gets invited to parties. I don’t understand that.
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Kramy (#818)
Quote: ""it's the way of the future""
Posted: 5504 days ago
I need to compensate you somehow for your awesome linguistic skills.
Cheers for that.
Joel Kelly (#1517)
Location: Canada
Quote: "www.ingenioustries.com"
Posted: 5504 days ago
Wolfgang (#1368)
Location: Berlin, Germany
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Noble Brown (#2407)
Location: Washington , DC
Quote: "Those that can't criticize"
Posted: 5504 days ago
Lance Mertz (#3541)
Location: Seattle
Quote: "It wasn't me, I wasn't there and did nothing."
Posted: 5504 days ago
Jess (#3888)
Location: CT, USA
Quote: "Only the meek get pinched. The bold survive. "
Posted: 5504 days ago
Greg Cunningham (#1743)
Location: Norrisville, Maryland
Quote: "quick...be funny"
Posted: 5504 days ago
That all said, I am enjoying this! An excellent waste of 5 minutes of my time. Thank you!
"like a cat
tied to a stick,"
GC
Lea Hirschfeld (#3119)
Location: California
Posted: 5504 days ago
Ashley (#3889)
Location: Denver
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Adam (#24)
Location: Morristown, Indiana
Quote: "Why do I blog? Simple, because Max Barry blogs."
Posted: 5504 days ago
-adam
Justin (#2009)
Location: Halfmoon, NY
Quote: "Max(x) is awesome!"
Posted: 5504 days ago
Tommy Mandel (#2554)
Location: nYc
Quote: ""Hah," she said."
Posted: 5504 days ago
Yenzo (#829)
Location: Secret underwater pyramid base in the Pacific
Quote: "In order to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe (Carl Sagan)"
Posted: 5504 days ago
loving it so far. And by "it" I mean the both the text and the concept, as well as the comments.
If the characterization is going in the direction that I think it's going, you might want to check out Homo Faber (the philosophical concept as well as the Swiss novel), if you haven't already done so.
I forgot how much fun it is to read your novels, thanks for reminding me.
Joe M. (#3183)
Location: Texas
Quote: "Grooviness is essential"
Posted: 5504 days ago
I like this sentence a lot. "And" instead of "while" makes it much more interesting and evocative than it might have been. Of course you already know that, being the author and not a careless one, but I thought I'd voice my appreciation all the same.
gstein42 (#585)
Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 5504 days ago
re: machine man, i'm so confused.
Machine (#957)
Posted: 5504 days ago
I like this Machine Man guy. I like his bordering on mental disorder capacity to be nonplussed by the fact that people are somewhat repulsed by him. He seems to be outside of the conventional social normality realm in a vulnerable rather than a sociopathic kind of way. This I find intriguing. What a wily fellow you are Max Barry.
Please write more words and more frequently, how hard could it be.
Amber (#3671)
Location: Oregon, U.S.A
Posted: 5503 days ago
I'm liking these little blips about who "he" is.
Maybe he likes the not dating or being spoken to bit?? He dug the no visitors in the hospital.
Eubrian (#3914)
Posted: 5497 days ago
Josh Kinal (#3354)
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posted: 5469 days ago
But now he doesn't get invited to parties and we're right there with him.
Nicely done, sir. I'm loving this whole process.
stanley becker (#5283)
Location: black hole
Quote: "DON"T JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER!!"
Posted: 4790 days ago
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