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Carl the security guard deposited me in my chair in the Glass Room. We called it the Glass Room because it looked over the adjoining labs, but actually the walls were a green-tinged polycarbonate plastic. They used to be glass, apparently, until an incident involving a spilled beaker, an experimental strain of weapons-grade pathogen, and some panicked researchers with office chairs. When I heard this story, the pathogen was harmless, and served as a wake-up call to management. But later I overheard a version in which six people died before the complex could be locked down, and thirty-one afterward, when they flooded the labs with gas. This was according to Jason, one of my graduate lab assistants. Since he was telling it to Elaine, my best-looking graduate lab assistant, I figured he was embellishing. But I’ve never been able to tell when people are lying. All I know is the walls are plastic now.

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Dan Guy (#3896)

Quote: "[email protected]"
Posted: 5512 days ago

So they have weapons-grade pathogen AND graduate lab assistants? That must be some (seriously dangerous) place.

Ajna (#3795)

Location: USA
Quote: "Judge if you want. We are all going to die one day. I intend to deserve it."
Posted: 5512 days ago

So, wait... Why is he in the room they used for testing a weapons-grade pathogen? Seems that these people are a bit constrained for space... Which leads me to believe there's more than one reason they want our lead character to hush up...

Mayhaps this company has a tendency to... Circumvent the law... So to speak?

Machine Man subscriber Impotent Verse (#3907)

Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 5512 days ago

I love the term "weapons-grade" as an adjective. It has such a menacing dystopian overtone. From now on I shall make it my adjective of choice for "something seriously bad(ass)" e.g.

I have a weapons-grade hangover this morning.
The canteen sandwiches were weapons-grade today.
Did you see the new girl in Finance, she has a weapons-grade rack on her!

Machine Man subscriber Joe M. (#3183)

Location: Texas
Quote: "Grooviness is essential"
Posted: 5512 days ago

Hahahahaha.

Both at Max (great page!) and at Pev (perfect).

John Smith (#2931)

Location: USA KS
Quote: "You don't know me and I don't know you."
Posted: 5512 days ago

I do enjoy the story, but to say that you are putting out a page a day is absurd. My 2 year old has books with more words per page.

You are either writing on post-it notes, or these pages are 18 font, triple spaced, with 3 inch margins?

Let's see if we can't lengthen these pages a bit, and get this thing moving along.

the-tine (#472)

Location: Pennsylvania, USA
Quote: "Coming soon to a planet near you."
Posted: 5512 days ago

@ John Smith: Now, now - everyone wants Max to write more. But this isn't a school assignment - Mr. Barry is a grown adult author. He's already decided to respond to our desperate pleas for more reading material. Beggars can't be choosers!

@Pev: Right on.

Machine Man subscriber Mapuche (#1184)

Location: Darwin, Australia
Quote: "Inconceivable!"
Posted: 5512 days ago

John Smith - looking a gift page in the font size...

Keith Nixon (#3894)

Location: BC, Canada
Quote: "Hmmmm......."
Posted: 5512 days ago

@Pev: That last one was so funny I forwarded it to my buddy!

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 5512 days ago

Very good work, Pev.

These "pages" are actually scenes. We've all figured that out, right? They're variable-length.

Some people here are going FREAK RIGHT OUT the day I post a one-sentence page. And I will do it. Oh yes.

the-tine (#472)

Location: Pennsylvania, USA
Quote: "Coming soon to a planet near you."
Posted: 5511 days ago

Aww, snap!

/pre-FREAK OUT

Abgrund (#3357)

Location: Atlantis
Quote: ""Redeem your mind from the hockshops of authority." - Ayn Rand"
Posted: 5510 days ago

Yeah, it's kind of plain they aren't pages /per se/. Otherwise, they would start and end in the middle of a sentence at least half the time, which would make for less than ideal reading. If you ask me.

Katy (#2345)

Location: Los Angeles
Posted: 5507 days ago

What's wrong with stopping in the middle of sentences? I do it all the

Machine Man subscriber Skippy (#3937)

Location: Melbourne
Posted: 5498 days ago

Max, I can't wait for a one sentence page. That will be very B.S. Johnson of you.

stanley becker (#5283)

Location: black hole
Quote: "DON"T JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER!!"
Posted: 4798 days ago

Is the polycarbonate clear or tinted? - was the glass smoked or clear? - is polycarbonate inferior to glass? - did the office chairs break the glass? - and finally DID Jason make out with Elaine?

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