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“You’ve killed him.” Cassandra Cautery stepped carefully over the broken glass, braced herself against what was left of the window frame, and peered down. “Look at him. He’s just lying there.”

I tried to say: I didn’t mean to. But I couldn’t get the words out. My chest was squeezing tight my lungs.

“That guy is dead.” There was a touch of awe in her voice. “He is definitely dead.”

Against my better judgment, I looked. Most of the space between Better Future and the road was occupied by a wide, healthy lawn. It looked soft. But it was bisected by a narrow concrete path, and on this lay the Manager. I am tempted to claim this as really bad luck, but given his position, I couldn’t honestly say he would have survived if he’d landed on the grass. I couldn’t see his head.

My legs took a step forward, surprising me. Now I was teetering right on the edge. It was as if my legs wanted to look at what they had done.

“Oh, Charlie,” Cassandra Cautery murmured. Her eyes didn’t move from the Manager’s tiny, broken body. “You are in so very, very much trouble.”

My legs tensed. Four key sections contracted two inches. I felt scared and confused, because I wasn’t making them do this. And maybe it was a fear reaction: maybe my terrified brain was barfing out static that the Contours misread. But that’s not what it felt like. It felt like they were making decisions on their own.

Behind me, someone screamed. I didn’t have to turn to see that picture: the Manager’s beautiful assistant, one hand on the door handle, the other flying to her mouth, shocked eyes wide, drinking in the scene. I didn’t have to hang around to know what would happen next: the alarm call, the security guards, the lockdown. My legs were right, I realized. They had summarized the situation faster than I had. Now we were on the same page, and I took a breath, and we jumped.

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Machine Man subscriber Robert Dillette (#2827)

Location: Brisbane, QLD
Quote: "Cante Jondo and The Blues; Popular suffering raised to a high art."
Posted: 6307 days ago

You know, I believe he can fly. I think about it every night and day. Go on Charlie. Spread your wings and fly away.

Machine Man subscriber dabbeljuh (#4114)

Posted: 6307 days ago

i still connect the complete office scene somehow to the hitchhikers guide scene where arthur leaps out of the office when under fire:

"What the hell, he thought, you're only young once, and threw himself out of the window. That would at least keep the element of surprise on his side."

but he did not have contours :)

Machine Man subscriber Chemical Rascal (#3964)

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "Don't read this. It's not relevant to anything. Go away."
Posted: 6307 days ago

In other news today, The Manager of Better Future has been murdered by a employee of Better Future, who then committed suicide. Better Future refused to release any further information, due to a sensitive project the employee was working on at the time.

Now, onto Sport, with...

Machine Man subscriber Electrichead (#3898)

Location: Toronto
Posted: 6307 days ago

Charlie should take over as Manager.

Machine Man subscriber JD (#4153)

Location: Savoy
Quote: "Pants?"
Posted: 6307 days ago

Thank you Cassandra for responding to our comments yesterday.

I guess, what surprises me is the lack of subordinates exulting Munchkin style about their steel-legged savior.

Machine Man subscriber Bob (#4095)

Location: Kansas
Quote: "Freeze!!! This is the Government!!"
Posted: 6307 days ago

“That guy is dead.” There was a touch of awe in her voice. “He is definitely dead.”

LOVE this line!

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6307 days ago

Loved this page Max, new faveorite.

Machine Man subscriber SexCpotatoes (#2188)

Location: Navarre, Ohio
Quote: ""Democracy is the theory that the common man knows what he wants, and deserves to get it good and hard." - H. L. Mencken"
Posted: 6307 days ago

Not so unexpectedly, this development almost certainly makes Cassandra Cautery want Charlie even more.

Damn you, Max, we can't all be Manager-kicking murderers. Women just love the "bad boys," and you have to write in some of the most unrealistic expectations for a guy to live up to. Of course this assumes that women compare men to fictional characters, I'm sure it happens more than you'd think...

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6306 days ago

so... Cassie seems so definite, so SURE that he's dead... would anyone be surprised if he's not dead? or if he is rebuilt by Charlie?

Machine Man subscriber Chemical Rascal (#3964)

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "Don't read this. It's not relevant to anything. Go away."
Posted: 6306 days ago

gStein, the first time I glanced at your last sentence, I thought it said "or if he is rebuilt by Chinese?"

Now, that would be some serious outsourcing.

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6306 days ago

lol @ Chemical Rascal

Machine Man subscriber M.I.Minter (#347)

Location: Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA
Quote: "When I read about the evils of drinking, I gave up reading."
Posted: 6304 days ago

A couple of things:
One, I liked the manager, it's the first character I could truly identify with and he should show up in the end, like the finnal boss you have to beat in a video game.
Two, Better Future remindes me of Veredian Dynamics. There is a great show you should check out called Better off Ted. It's almost a complete rip off of your book company by which I mean it is Clever to the tenth degree and it makes me happy.
They have some great online video promos for the show. just google veridian dynamics

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