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Machine Man (serial)

I realized that meeting Lola Banks was not going to be easy when I exited the Better Future elevator and a security guard fell into step beside me, muttering into his headset. By the time I reached the lobby, there were four of them, and another two moving to block the glass doors. Carl was there, of course. Carl was everywhere. “Can I help you, Dr. Neumann?”

My legs, the Contours, were already detouring around him, and it was few moments before I could persuade them to stop. They were fiesty. But finally I came to a juddering halt. Quiet fell. The receptionist had vanished, I noticed. The entire lobby had emptied, but for me and the guards. “I’m going out.”

“Where would you like to go? We’ll escort you.”

“That’s kind of you, Carl,” I said. “But I have my own transport, thanks.”

His eyes slipped to my legs. The Contours were under my jeans, but they were longer than my old legs, and six inches of gleaming titanium poked out the bottom. Also, my feet were essentially hooves. On the plus side, I was really tall. “I’m sorry, Dr. Neumann. But I have to insist.”

I thought: I should just walk out of here. Because it wasn’t like they could stop me. I honestly didn’t mean to express this as a mental instruction, of the kind the Contours were supposed to pick up. But, as I mentioned, they were fiesty. And suddenly they were moving so quickly I had to grip the sides of the bucket seat to stay on. “Whoa,” I said. Carl lunged at me like a linebacker. The Contours stepped around him and ran at the lobby doors. These did not open in time, which caused the collision-detection software to stop me so suddenly that my forehead cracked against the smoked glass. That really hurt. I would have to fix that. Then the gap between the doors grew wide enough and the Contours took off. It was like sitting on a jackhammer. Wind tore at my face. The sun hurt my eyes. Carl didn’t shoot at me, though. That was good.

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Machine Man subscriber Chemical Rascal (#3964)

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "Don't read this. It's not relevant to anything. Go away."
Posted: 5488 days ago

"Carl didn’t shoot at me, though. That was good."

Sorta sounds like he:

A. Expected to be shot at, or,
B. Had been shot at by Carl before. Interesting...

Also, I'm waiting for the purchase date, Max. It feels like I've passed my personal free-quick-read-at-the-bookstore page limit a fair while ago...

Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature (Bowie)"
Posted: 5488 days ago

Wow, what would happen if all his body parts had a mind of their own? A bliming mess that's what!

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 5488 days ago

My mental image was Charlie head butting the wall above the door, seeing as he's 6 inches up and bounding but I guess that didn't happen, perhaps his place of work is posh enough to have a super tall glass sliding front door. Y'see, when you leave out detail, the reader has to go back and edit mental pictures on the fly (so to speak).

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 5488 days ago

Also, speaking of metal images, er, mental images, I did a quick and dirty.
http://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/4UzaYlF9WN3ejdeZEaUExg?feat=directlink

Abgrund (#3357)

Location: Atlantis
Quote: ""Redeem your mind from the hockshops of authority." - Ayn Rand"
Posted: 5488 days ago

What's with the Honda logo on his codpiece?

Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature (Bowie)"
Posted: 5488 days ago

Yuck. Thanks!

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 5488 days ago

My apologies to the original artist, who's work I blatantly misused for about 10 minutes seeing as I was at work, and had to rush to a meeting:
http://arizonarainman.blogspot.com/2008/11/tired-get-hondas-robot-legs.html

Machine Man subscriber Yannick (#3858)

Location: Heist, Belgium
Quote: "he reads things"
Posted: 5488 days ago

He can fall out of the bucket?
I thought he kinda ingrained the bucket into his hipbones and stuff. I guess Charlie isn't really the bio-mechanical type of guy... Aww :(

Obviously the different legs would have the same plug-in dimensions.

Keith Nixon (#3894)

Location: BC, Canada
Quote: "Hmmmm......."
Posted: 5488 days ago

Mr. Neumann (Kinda sounds like "New Man". I felt like I was reading Pilgrim's Progress!) Coincidence?

Keith Nixon (#3894)

Location: BC, Canada
Quote: "Hmmmm......."
Posted: 5488 days ago

Isn't that Milton?

Machine Man subscriber Yannick (#3858)

Location: Heist, Belgium
Quote: "he reads things"
Posted: 5488 days ago

@Keith:
"Neumann" is basically a literal translation of "Newman" in German.

John Reilly (#4320)

Location: DC
Quote: "When in the course"
Posted: 5418 days ago

I believe that it's spelled "feisty."

stanley becker (#5283)

Location: black hole
Quote: "DON"T JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER!!"
Posted: 4774 days ago

all this for the desire of Lola - what I can't understand is what part of Lola's biology does Charlie find exciting - is he a leg man? or is he a breast man? etc., etc., - paradoxically he is attracted to her biology and yet he is repulsed by his own - Charlie is manifesting serious pathology - maybe Lola is a robotic sex-aid doll [that would explain the attraction]

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