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I went for the Contours, half-expecting Carl to stop me. I had, after all, used these to flee the company; I would have understood if Carl’s hand had closed on my wrist and he said: Choose something slower. But he just leaned against one wall with his arms folded as I lifted myself onto the table and began to fit myself.

I won’t lie. It was possibly the most sensual experience of my life. I had missed the legs, a lot, but still underestimated how good it would feel to have them back. As I slid my terminated thighs into the restraints and began aligning the tiny needles that transmitted my nerve signals to circuitry, I could feel synapses popping in my brain like fireworks. I closed my eyes.

“You really like those things,” said Carl.

I looked at him.

“They can press, what, a ton?”

“Something like that.” It was four tons. And, frankly, that was nothing, compared to some of the others. But I didn’t say that, because Carl was trying to engage me, and I didn’t want to be engaged.

“You can never be strong enough,” Carl said. “That’s for sure.”

I stood up. The Contours’ hooves thunk-thunked against the floor. I was tall again. “I think I’ve got it from here.”

He nodded. If he was miffed, it was hard to tell. He placed a card on the steel bench beside him: my ID. Then he left. It was the last time I ever saw him. All of him, I mean.

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Machine Man subscriber Impotent Verse (#3907)

Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 6306 days ago

A cliff hanger and it's not even Friday!

Machine Man subscriber fredzfrog (#2368)

Location: Moe
Quote: "Fredzfrog"
Posted: 6306 days ago

cyborg carl!

Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature"
Posted: 6306 days ago

His nemesis to be?

Machine Man subscriber Sander (#4031)

Location: Amsterdam, NL
Quote: "Write a wise saying and your name will live forever. —Anonymous"
Posted: 6306 days ago

Ah, we got ourselves an arch enemy!

Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6306 days ago

Bugger Carl, what about those tiny nerve needles? Yuck!

Only a really twisted writer would've come up with that and made it all sensual 'n' stuff. Yay Max!

Machine Man subscriber Craig Jelic (#3999)

Location: Canberra
Posted: 6306 days ago

Is it voluntary though?

Machine Man subscriber Paul Haggerty (#3189)

Location: Bloomington
Quote: "Does the sky look orange to you as well?"
Posted: 6306 days ago

hmmm...
i like how you threw in the bit about carl at the end.
it makes me like... crazy excited to read the next page tomorrow.

Machine Man subscriber Ted (#4023)

Location: Ohio, USA
Quote: "There is a guy in Lab Control who once killed a woman with his car, and he gets invited to parties. I don’t understand that."
Posted: 6306 days ago

Oh snap.

Charlie, Lola, now Carl? Is "Better Future" going to be "Better People" soon? And what about creepy Cassandra?

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6306 days ago

methinks Carl is jealous

Machine Man subscriber Mark (#4045)

Posted: 6306 days ago

I've been enjoying this, obviously, or I wouldn't have paid to keep reading. But during these dozen or so pages since it stopped being free, the story has come into its own. I've begun to really care about these people and have a feel for who they are, in particular Lola and our narrator and now even Carl.

Machine Man subscriber C Leffelman (#3968)

Location: IL
Quote: "You can only be young once. But you can always be immature. - Dave Barry "
Posted: 6306 days ago

Cyborg legs and arms, standard Better Future security attire?

Machine Man subscriber SilverKnight (#2210)

Location: St. Louis
Posted: 6306 days ago

I forgot I paid for this until Mark mentioned it, it was that fast of a decision! Something tells me we wont hear too much from Carl for a while at least, but I don't want to speculate why... :) Lovin' it!

Machine Man subscriber CrystalR (#4160)

Posted: 6306 days ago

Noooo, Carl!

Charlie's crazy has gone airborne!!!

Machine Man subscriber Katie Ellert (#207)

Location: Calgary AB Canada
Quote: "Where's Lola? WHERE'S LOLA?!?!"
Posted: 6305 days ago

Oooooooo I'm excited!
I honestly didn't see that coming, though it is going to be interesting. I kinda hope there is some kind of 'accident' and he starts to re-build Carl. Like some sort of new project...

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