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Machine Man (serial)
CHAPTER ELEVEN
I was by Lola’s side when she woke. She took me by surprise, even though I’d been waiting for it: her eyelids fluttered and two dozen tiny muscles contracted and suddenly her face looked completely different. It was a little disconcerting, to be honest. I hadn’t watched many people sleep before. Any, now I think about it. Maybe a couple of dogs. And they had not prepared me for this: this sudden infusion of consciousness, where a second ago there had been none. Not to insult dogs. But it was different.
“Hey,” I said softly. Lola reached for her nose, because there were a couple tubes in there. I guided her hand away. “You’ve had surgery. They had to fix your heart.”
Her eyes widened. Her fingers moved down to her chest, touched the bulge beneath her gown. “Bah.”
“It’s okay. Just try to relax.”
“Bah.”
I leaned closer. “What?”
“Bah.” Her fingers closed around my shirt. “Bah.”
“Don’t exert yourself,” I said, alarmed. “You’re not supposed to raise your blood pressure.”
She pulled. I went with it, because I feared that if I resisted, she would pop her stitches. Her lips brushed my ear. “Back,” she said. “Put it back.”





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Location: Moe
Quote: "Fredzfrog"
Posted: 6316 days ago
anyhoo.. the 'max barry:' bit up the top for me this time is "now with enhanced features" coincidence?
Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6316 days ago
Hmm, so she wants her old metal ticker reinstalled... There'll be an extra charge for that, it's not covered under the manufacturer's warranty -- uncertified, non-refurb parts must not be installed for a warranty repair, unless instructed otherwise by the service department manager or acting department manager and form YBDT-1242 is countersigned by the VP of Customer Relations. Sorry.
Location: oceanside
Quote: "revolution is the best revenge"
Posted: 6316 days ago
Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6316 days ago
Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6316 days ago
Location: Spokane, Washington
Quote: "Corgis are like potato chips"
Posted: 6315 days ago
I would think that our protagonist made sure she got an upgrade, but what does this mean to her? Could go either way!
Posted: 6315 days ago
Badum-bum tsshh.
Anyway, page-related comment: Bah!
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6315 days ago
> is it strange that i enjoy reading the comments as much as i enjoy reading Machine Man?
*sobs*
Location: Texas, USA
Quote: ""A person who won't read has no advantage over one who can't read. " --Mark Twain"
Posted: 6118 days ago
(side note) I have to read all the comments too. I found that it adds volumes to the experience.
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