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Machine Man (serial)

Cassandra Cautery was waiting for me in a small, dark observation room above an operating theater. She was a tiny, suited silhouette. When Carl wheeled me in, she glanced at me, then returned her attention to the green-cloaked figures revolving around the operating table. Carl closed the door. Before he could get his hands on my wheelchair again, I found the grips and pushed myself up to the glass.

Lola Banks was on the table. I knew this because I could see one arm poking out from beneath an ocean of green cloth. It was the only piece of her I could see, but that was enough. A surgeon stood with his back to me, his shoulders working. It felt very wrong, her lying there while a man she didn’t know dug into her chest.

“I think Miss Banks must have got herself into a trial,” said Cassandra Cautery. “The heart is a SynCardia model, but not one our people recognize.”

I could see it. The top, at least. It sat in a steel bowl on a tray to a surgeon’s right, a red-stained chunk of plastic and metal. It looked strange, but then I suppose it had been deformed by two close-range impacts from Carl’s not-quite-lethal ammunition. Also, I didn’t really know what artificial hearts were supposed to look like. I wasn’t up to that yet.

“Unusual, to have steel components,” she said. “Very unusual. Please ask her about that, when she wakes up.”

I said nothing. I wasn’t talking to Cassandra Cautery. I had decided this in the wheelchair, as Carl pushed me through corridors that smelt oddly of fresh paint. I wasn’t talking to any of these people until Lola was okay.

“Fortunately, we have a replacement for her. A little custom model of our own. And the facilities to install it.” She looked at me. “This room didn’t exist until two weeks ago. We just finished construction. You believe in luck, Charlie?”

I kept my mouth shut.

“Me neither,” she said. “Someone’s looking out for your girl, that’s what I think. Someone upstairs.”

At first I thought she meant God. Then I thought she meant management. Then I wasn’t sure.

“We built this place for you, you know. To help your project.”

“I don’t think I want to continue the project.” It broke my vow of silence. But I couldn’t let her keep talking like we were on the same side.

Cassandra Cautery said nothing for a while. “All right, Charlie. Whatever you want.” She didn’t believe me. I couldn’t blame her. I wasn’t sure I believed myself.

We watched the surgery. After a while, the surgeon with his back to us moved aside. Lola’s chest was a pit. It gaped at me, red and wet.

“As long as we’ve got her open,” Cassandra Cautery said, almost to herself, “I wonder if we should put anything else in there.” I looked at her, furious, but also embarrassed, because I had been thinking the same thing.

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Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature"
Posted: 6320 days ago

Gentlemen, we can rebuild her. We have the technology...to make her better, stronger, faster....

Cue music.

Machine Man subscriber Electrichead (#3898)

Location: Toronto
Posted: 6320 days ago

I love this line: "At first I thought she meant God. Then I thought she meant management. Then I wasn’t sure."

Machine Man subscriber AndrewCyb (#4042)

Location: Takoma Park, MD
Quote: "OK today, let's see what you've got. (Circles warily...)"
Posted: 6320 days ago

Loving this page a lot Max. Keep it up!

Machine Man subscriber fredzfrog (#2368)

Location: Moe
Quote: "Fredzfrog"
Posted: 6320 days ago

heh... super liver?
wait, no..
(coolpillows will like this..)

self baconing stomach! :)

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6320 days ago

I guess these days it would be 6 b-illion dollars.

Did anyone else think of this?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbMeukdRDt8

Machine Man subscriber SilverKnight (#2210)

Location: St. Louis
Posted: 6319 days ago

I hope you don't mind, Max, but I'm showing this page to a few key friends. THIS is the kind of birthday present I was hoping for. :D Thank you!!!

Machine Man subscriber Ted (#4023)

Location: Ohio, USA
Quote: "There is a guy in Lab Control who once killed a woman with his car, and he gets invited to parties. I don’t understand that."
Posted: 6319 days ago

They probably meant tracking, GPS, surveillance stuff seeing as she "attacked" Carl. They probably think she's a threat or will "go rouge." Hmm...

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6319 days ago

These pages are getting longer than I intended. Must try to get that under control.

Machine Man subscriber rebecca (#3891)

Location: oceanside
Quote: "revolution is the best revenge"
Posted: 6319 days ago

Max-
You've got the pages that are too long and then you've got the 6 word pages, so it all balances out, no need to get it under control.

Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature"
Posted: 6319 days ago

Quality and quantity! We're spoiled rotten.

Machine Man subscriber Alan W (#1427)

Location: Spokane, Washington
Quote: "Corgis are like potato chips"
Posted: 6315 days ago

Max, if you publish this in dead tree form, are you going to keep the same page numbering?

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6313 days ago

I don't know... I'll figure that out later. Right now I'm trying to keep thinking of it as a serial, not a novel.

Machine Man subscriber Pam (#4242)

Location: Fanland
Quote: ""Must I, if I love and apple, never more desire a peach?" -Goblin Market"
Posted: 6300 days ago

Also genius: "It gaped at me, red and wet."

Machine Man subscriber Felix (#4236)

Location: NZ
Quote: "I'm naked underneath my clothes"
Posted: 6300 days ago

"I didn’t really know what artificial hearts were supposed to look like. I wasn’t up to that yet."

The "yet" disturbs me. Brilliant read so far!

Neville and Irene (#4285)

Posted: 6280 days ago

I loved the subtle sexual allusions towards the end, made me smile in a secret sort of way

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