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Machine Man (serial)
I made it to Lola’s table without crushing anything. “Hi,” I said. I was very happy to see her again. She was right: I had been at the lab too long. I had forgotten what it felt like to interact with people for the pleasure of it.
“Hi.” Her cheeks reddened. Cafe patrons were staring. “Have a seat.”
“I’m already in one.” I concentrated. The Contours settled; pistons retracted. This still left me towering above the table, but not as much.
Lola’s mouth formed an O. I felt proud, to have caused that O. “Did you… have any trouble getting here?”
“No. Well.” I reconsidered. “Actually, I almost killed some people. It’s the first time the Contours have been in a real-world environment. It’s highlighted a few issues.”
“Contours?”
“This model leg I’m wearing. I have others.” Lola inhaled. “Well—when I say legs, I mean transports. Most are tracks. One is a kind of drill.”
“Why is one a kind—”
“I don’t know.” I laughed. I felt giddy. “The company gave me carte blanche and I got carried away.”
Lola’s eyes stopped on my fingers. I had meant to keep that hand out of sight. But I was nervous and it had started fiddling with a salt shaker. My index finger was curled around the shaker three times. It was made of rubber. Actually, it was a black hydrocarbon polymer over titanium, silicon, and more copper than you might expect. But to Lola, it would have looked like a long, flexible, black rubber sausage.
I put my hand back under the table. Lola looked at me through her eyelashes. When she spoke, her voice was low and throaty. “Charlie… what have you done to your fingers?”
“Well,” I said. “You know.”
“Show me.”
I glanced around, but the nearby customers had returned to their food, or pretended to. I placed my hand on the table.
Lola Banks sat rigid. She didn’t seem to be breathing. “Could you show me your legs?”
“Yes, of course. Come back to Better Future and I’ll show you the collection.” But I could see from her expression that this was not what she meant.
“Privately,” she said.
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Ian Manka (#3916)
Location: Los Angeles, California (school) | Akron, Ohio (home)
Quote: "Though I am not naturally honest, I am so sometimes by chance."
Posted: 5597 days ago
Hey-oh!
Achem... anyways, not what I expected when we learned of Charlie's new fingers... so they don't have joints? They can coil around things like snakes? Or act like the prehensile tails of monkeys?
I'm getting more and more puzzled by my mental image of Charlie... :/
Craig Barron (#1276)
Location: Leeds, UK.
Quote: "Trust Elizabeth to get upset over a donut."
Posted: 5597 days ago
Ajna (#3795)
Location: USA
Quote: "Judge if you want. We are all going to die one day. I intend to deserve it."
Posted: 5597 days ago
Has he made the ultimate human sacrifice in exchange for what those late-night "enzyte" and "extenze" commercials promise?
Electrichead (#3898)
Location: Toronto
Posted: 5597 days ago
Justin (#3965)
Location: USA
Quote: "It has been my experience that certain men get ahead during the time that others waste. - Henry Ford"
Posted: 5597 days ago
tim (#3234)
Location: chattanooga, TN, USA
Quote: """
Posted: 5597 days ago
I don't know what to say about the story's development. Of course, we're only 40 pages in which is usually just character development in a normal novel. It's the fact that it's been like 2 months or whatever makes me wonder if the story is going to go anywhere. At least now we have sex... which will do for now.
Tommy Mandel (#2554)
Location: nYc
Quote: ""Hah," she said."
Posted: 5597 days ago
M.I.Minter (#347)
Location: Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA
Quote: "When I read about the evils of drinking, I gave up reading."
Posted: 5597 days ago
Abgrund (#3357)
Location: Atlantis
Quote: ""Redeem your mind from the hockshops of authority." - Ayn Rand"
Posted: 5597 days ago
gstein42 (#585)
Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 5597 days ago
@Tommy: 90% sure she's the prosthetics expert
@Tim: "At least now we have sex... which will do for now" <- best comment so far
Yannick (#3858)
Location: Heist, Belgium
Quote: "he reads things"
Posted: 5597 days ago
tim (#3234)
Location: chattanooga, TN, USA
Quote: """
Posted: 5596 days ago
Good job Maxy.
btw, I'm rooting for Lola to be a rogue cyborg looking for better parts.
Toby O (#2900)
Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 5595 days ago
Max
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 5595 days ago
> how do i get a hex nut next to my name?
An excellent question! You buy a copy. Machine Man owners get the nut.
stanley becker (#5283)
Location: black hole
Quote: "DON"T JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER!!"
Posted: 4883 days ago
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