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Machine Man (serial)
But I digress. I was talking about the crying baby that woke me. I discovered the infant care ward while cruising the hallways in my new hospital-issue wheelchair; I glanced inside a room to see rows of glowing pink- and brown- skinned babies, tiny limbs flailing and clutching at the air inside yellow plastic incubators. Couples filled the chairs, wrapped around each other. I stopped going that way, though, when one man looked at me like: Well, that puts things into perspective.
The baby that woke me sounded frightened. I heard another join it, then a third. Each crying baby seemed louder than the last, until I realized they were just closer.
Cassandra Cautery, the tiny lawyer, appeared in the doorway. She wore a snug gray jacket over a pinstripe shirt with a big collar, and a little skirt. It was a schoolgirl-meets-Wall-Street look. Her eyes glistened, as if she was on the verge of tears. Her lips trembled like she couldn’t keep the sympathy in. “Oh, Charlie,” she said. “Look at you, you poor thing.” I could barely hear her over the wailing of the babies.
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Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 5864 days ago
Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 5864 days ago
I like the idea that small children (and possibly animals) have an instinctive fear of corporate lawyers.
Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 5864 days ago
Also, juxtaposing the babies with the reminder that Cassandra is tiny, made for the strange mental image of a baby in a business suit standing in the doorway (whose bottle has just been snatched away).
Abgrund (#3357)
Location: Atlantis
Quote: ""Redeem your mind from the hockshops of authority." - Ayn Rand"
Posted: 5864 days ago
Could a real machine be evil enough to practice corporate law?
Jess (#3888)
Location: CT, USA
Quote: "Only the meek get pinched. The bold survive. "
Posted: 5864 days ago
I've reread this several times and it still sounds awkward. Especially the second part. I can't tell where he is or get a good picture of the ward.
But I also agree with Pev, the crying babies are great. :)
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Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
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Posted: 5815 days ago
stanley becker (#5283)
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Posted: 5150 days ago
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