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Carl punched me in the stomach. I staggered backward and sat down on the hood of a car. Its windscreen imploded. The surprising thing about this was the weakness of Carl’s punch. I had seen the blow coming and tried to ride what I expected to be a massive transfer of momentum, but wasn’t. Sitting on the hood of a red sports car, I realized that compared to me, Carl’s arms were not very strong. Of course they weren’t: he had organic legs. There was no way he could carry around my kind of hardware. I didn’t want to let him get those things near my face, but they weren’t solid enough to punch through titanium. He couldn’t pick me up and throw me. He could barely push me.

I got off the car and swung at him. I did this so slowly that Carl not only had time to deflect it with his arm but first give me a patronizing look. My rage blossomed. I backed up, trying to put enough distance between us so I could use my gun-arm to insert a lot more metal into Carl than he already had. My heels hit the same car again, and it screamed, metal on concrete, folding up against the low retaining wall behind me. I raised my arm and Carl knocked it aside again. The car behind me popped and banged and suddenly there was less resistance than there had been. I staggered backward. A gap opened up between me and Carl and I squeezed fury through my arm. For an instant I thought I had him, then he stepped inside my reach and punched my arm upward. Chunks of ceiling rained down on me. The air filled with dense, choking dust. I was still staggering, trying to find solid ground behind me, and I discovered the reason the car was no longer pushing back on me was that I had forced it completely over the retaining wall, sending it tumbling end-over-end to the alley below, and the way I discovered this was all of a sudden so was I.

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Machine Man subscriber Mapuche (#1184)

Location: Darwin, Australia
Quote: "Inconceivable!"
Posted: 6147 days ago

"and the way I discovered this was all of a sudden so was I."

I had to read that a couple of time before I worked out the cadence that made sense.

"and the way I discovered this was that all of a sudden so was I."

or

"and the way I discovered this, was all of a sudden so was I."

This story keeps getting better!

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6147 days ago

interesting that Max used the term "windscreen"... he usually utilizes an american setting for his books, along with american spelling and american wordings.

Machine Man subscriber Alan W (#1427)

Location: Spokane, Washington
Quote: "Corgis are like potato chips"
Posted: 6146 days ago

I don't think the fighting thing is working out for ole Chuck.

I think that might be Max's point, stick with what you are good at when in a crisis.

Speaking of endings, I wonder if you can apply novel rules to a web serial like this.

I would be happy if this took a considerable amount more time to resolve itself.

Machine Man subscriber CrystalR (#4160)

Posted: 6146 days ago

gStein: what's the American equivalent?

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6146 days ago

@crystalR equivalent is 'windshield'

I'm going to assume that it was too difficult to write about a 'hood' being smashed rather than a 'bonnet' and the reference to what metal part of the car was being destroyed was just removed altogether.

I am also assuming the car is a Yugo.

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6146 days ago

ack just re-read the first sentence and it says hood. would like to retract the above comment. i think, for form's sake, i should also retract my other comment about 'except lola' on one of the previous pages.

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6142 days ago

Whoops. Idiom fail!

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