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Machine Man (serial)
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
I emerged from the Glass Room so tired I could barely keep my head up. The Contours bore me smoothly toward my bunk room, not minding that I nodded off once or twice along the way. They were good legs.
Lola was outside my room, leaning against the wall. That woke me up. “Hi,” she said. She fingered the hem of her Better Future polo shirt. Lola had worn nothing but company merchandise since her operation; I was pretty sure she hadn’t been outside.
“Hi,” I said.
“I’m sorry about before.” She took a step toward me, then a more confident one, and took my hand, the one with fingers. “I mean, I’m sorry we argued.”
“That’s okay.” And it was. Now she was here, I couldn’t even remember what we’d argued about.
“I’m a yeller.” She smiled crookedly. “I maybe should have warned you about that. It comes with growing up angry at your mom.” She held out her arms, and we hugged. It was fantastic. It went on forever. She turned her head and kissed my neck, and I almost passed out. “You’ll help Carl, won’t you?”
I stiffened.
Lola slipped out of the hug. “I’m not saying your parts. I get that now. Like my heart, that wasn’t just a thing. It was me. I should have realized you would feel the same way.” She bit her lip. “But I thought, maybe, if you wanted, you could make some new parts. For Carl. Do you think you could do that?”
“Yes,” I said. “I think I can do that.”
She grinned. “Well, that’s so great.”
I shrugged. “Well.”
“You’re the best. I don’t mean that like an expression.” She kicked my Contours. This registered as a non-localized tingling, like I was standing outside in a thunderstorm. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up. “I mean, you are the best, Charlie.” She began backing away. “You need your sleep. Talk tomorrow, okay?”
“Okay.” I went inside and sat on the bunk. I began to feel very guilty. Because what I’d said about helping Carl, that was kind of a cheat. If Cassandra Cautery did what I’d asked, Carl would not be around to be helped.





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Posted: 6328 days ago
Duhn duhn duhhhhhhhhhhhh...
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Ballotonia
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Posted: 6328 days ago
I feel bad for Charlie though, it doesn't really seem that Lola is that into him. She's into his art maybe, but not really that interested in him.
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Posted: 6328 days ago
Think of a groupie lusting after a musician, to take the example to perhaps its shallow extreme. They're interested in the 'art' and the 'celebrity', not the person.
Now I'm not suggesting Lola is into Charlie's celebrity (unlike some of the other interns around the joint) but isn't it natural to be attracted to somebody for which you have an affinity, and then be blinded by it / to them?
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Posted: 6328 days ago
I don't think Charlie would request Carl be killed, I think he wants him fired or laid off or something. The mere sight of Carl seems to bug the hell out of our protagonist, maybe Charlie could eventually get over that, but from the beginning of this novel, you just get the vibe that Charlie is not good with people. He doesn't understand them, or why they do what they do, at all. And much hilarity is bound to ensue because of this character flaw.
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Carl wasn't evil per say, just not always working with Charlie. I actually kinda like him.
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Isn't this another great thing about real-time writing? You get a free spelling/grammar check by your fans every page that can be easily fixed while it's still on the computer.
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or, something could eventually go horribly wrong and sitting down starts to provide the same sensation.
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