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I fell. The alley floor passed over my head and I felt the terrible mass of my body filling with kinetic energy, preparing to drive my biological parts into the ground. I tried to twist in mid-air and my body ignored me. Something exploded and it was a moment before I realized it wasn’t me. It was the car, a live preview of what was about to happen to me when I hit that alley. I screamed at my body’s betrayal, because of all the times for it to stop listening—

My hooves slammed into the roadtop. I gasped, expecting to fall over, then I gasped again, because I didn’t. I was perfectly balanced. I felt reproval from my body: And you doubted me. I felt like crying. I loved my body. I loved it so very much.

Carl appeared above me. He peered out from the parking garage, surrounded by so much swirling concrete dust that I could barely see him. Which meant he could barely see me. He was hanging himself out there, thinking I must be sprawled dead or broken. Now, said my parts, and I said: Yes yes yes. We got the gun-arm up, my parts and I, and we bellowed gunfire until we couldn’t see the garage any more.

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Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6146 days ago

Gunfire should always bellow. Also, loving one's body too much can cause problems, at least that's what I was taught in Catholic school. But then our hero only really loves his mechanical parts, so that's okay then I guess...

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6146 days ago

"in fact, the garage, it no longer existed. LOLA! i screamed." (and fade to black)

Machine Man subscriber Mapuche (#1184)

Location: Darwin, Australia
Quote: "Inconceivable!"
Posted: 6145 days ago

Love that last line.

Machine Man subscriber Electrichead (#3898)

Location: Toronto
Posted: 6145 days ago

So, imagine my shock to read this in a completely unexpected place:

http://io9.com/5397999/max-barrys-weird-cyborg-publishing-experiment-could-be-a-movie

Congrats, Max!

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6145 days ago

In the movie Tron where Flynn's program is searching around and he has a little pet named 'bit' which answers his questions yes or no, and in one instance says "yes yes yes" this is the voice I now imagine the legs to have.

Machine Man subscriber Josh (#4367)

Location: Sydney
Posted: 6145 days ago

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ddInW6sm7JE

Machine Man subscriber C Leffelman (#3968)

Location: IL
Quote: "You can only be young once. But you can always be immature. - Dave Barry "
Posted: 6145 days ago

What was even better is that my iTunes was on shuffle and the PERFECT techno song came on. Tell the producers of your movie that I have something for their soundtrack :D

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