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Machine Man (serial)

I rocketed up the side of the Better Future building. Smoked glass offices flashed past my face. At the top of my arc through the air, I cleared a railing with about two inches to spare, and landed on the balcony as gently as if I was stepping out of my house. This would have been by far the coolest thing I’d ever done, if I hadn’t just kicked a Hummer into a building. But I barely even felt surprise. I had realized something, down there on the lawn: I could trust my legs.

“Charlie!” It was Lola, coming out of the suite. I had picked the right balcony. Spatial skills: I had them. Lola threw herself into my arms. “Did you feel that, a second ago? Was that an earthquake?”

“No. That was me.”

She looked at me, then leaned over the balcony. “Did you jump up here? Did you jump?”

“There have been developments. We need to get out of here.”

“What’s that smoke? Is that a car?”

“Lola.” I took hold of her shoulders. Her eyes expanded until they covered the world. “It’s important we get out of here as fast as possible.”

She sucked in breath. “Okay.”

That was when I realized I couldn’t jump out of here. Or rather, I couldn’t do it with Lola. The moment my legs touched the ground and began to decelerate my body, Lola would weigh the equivalent of two thousand pounds. She would be torn out of my grasp.

She took my hand, the biological one. “I’m ready.”

Outside, I heard the ding of the elevator. That would be security.

“I knew you’d come back.” She was shining again: looking at me like I was the greatest thing in the world. “I knew.”

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Machine Man subscriber regtiangha (#4080)

Location: Calgary, AB, CANADA
Quote: ""It tastes like beef!""
Posted: 6246 days ago

Aw...

Machine Man subscriber Stuk (#4278)

Location: UK
Posted: 6246 days ago

"This would have been by far the coolest thing I’d ever done, if I hadn’t just kicked a Hummer into a building."

Haha! Absolutely brilliant!

"Spatial skills: I had them."

Sounds like lolcats... Nice and quotable this one :D

Machine Man subscriber M.I.Minter (#347)

Location: Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA
Quote: "When I read about the evils of drinking, I gave up reading."
Posted: 6246 days ago

Spatial skills: I had them

Brilllllllliant.

Machine Man subscriber Ballotonia (#4030)

Location: Netherlands
Quote: "Vote Early, Vote Often"
Posted: 6246 days ago

Really? I was wondering whether it should be "Spatial skills: I have them."

Something I noticed yesterday for the first time... The use of past tense would be normal in something I read in continuous format, but with one (relatively small) portion of text a day I tend to lose track of the difference between looking back to something that happened before, and something that is being described as the story is told.

Ballotonia

Machine Man subscriber Electrichead (#3898)

Location: Toronto
Posted: 6246 days ago

Temporal skills: Ballotontia is struggling with them :p

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6246 days ago

"Spatial skills: I had them."
sounds like a demotivator.

Machine Man subscriber Trevor (#4081)

Posted: 6232 days ago

Lola is always sucking in or exhaling or holding her breath.

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6224 days ago

She's got to breathe, dammit!

Machine Man subscriber Hyper (#4612)

Location: Texas, USA
Quote: ""A person who won't read has no advantage over one who can't read. " --Mark Twain"
Posted: 6114 days ago

gStein, I want to see that demotivator.

Machine Man subscriber Anonymous (#4622)

Posted: 5924 days ago

“I knew you’d come back.” She was shining again: looking at me like I was the greatest thing in the world. “I knew.”

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Was she aware there was a problem and that he had left?

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