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The first shot thumped into my left bicep. I felt it not so much as a physical pain as an insult. I hadn’t realized how deeply offensive it was to have someone deliberately injure you. I shouted, “Hey!” and my voice was thick with outrage. I was going to march up to this guard and explain I was a human being, dammit, with hopes and dreams and an ID card, and you can’t just shoot people. You can’t just kill them. Which may have been a little rich, given I was standing next to the mangled body of the Manager, but I didn’t think of that at the time. I was aflame with indignation about my violated bicep. The only thing that drove this plan from my mind was the realization that this bullet was not the last of today’s insults; that many more insults were heading my way within the next few seconds, unless I got out of there as fast as mechanically possible.

So I did. My legs fired. My neck snapped back. Something passed by my head so close it sucked my hair into its wake. I grabbed at the sides of the bucket seat, afraid of falling out, which should have been impossible but that’s not what it felt like. With each step, my legs stretched out before me and my hooves drove into the lawn. They almost slipped once, and then we reached the sidewalk and I felt them settle. They liked concrete. I think we both did. I clung on, cars and trees blurring past me, until the security guards were far, far behind, and I was safe, and I realized I had left behind something very important.

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Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature"
Posted: 6305 days ago

The way you described his umbrage at being shot was priceless!

Machine Man subscriber Robert Dillette (#2827)

Location: Brisbane, QLD
Quote: "Cante Jondo and The Blues; Popular suffering raised to a high art."
Posted: 6305 days ago

It's the ID card that gets me laughing. Hopes, dreams AND an ID card. How *dare* they!

Machine Man subscriber Mapuche (#1184)

Location: Darwin, Australia
Quote: "Inconceivable!"
Posted: 6305 days ago

"and I realized I had left behind something very important."

V

"and I realized I had left something very important behind."

To me the second flows better after all that preceeds - I had to reread to be sure of the meaning.

But once again the master story teller is leaving the page prophets in his wake (literally by the speed of those contours...)

Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6305 days ago

Left behind his wallet? His keys? Condoms? Oh, his love interest! Yeah, I hate it when protagonists do that. Easy mistake to make though when bullets are whizzing past your head and into your artificial biceps.

I hope she understands that when you kick a Manager out of a very high window resulting the termination of his life functions you need to make tracks in short order. Buy her some flowers and hope for the best...

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6305 days ago

legs? check. Head? check. arm? ARM? crap.

Machine Man subscriber Stygian Emperor (#2947)

Location: the Stygian Empire
Quote: "Flesh is a design flaw."
Posted: 6305 days ago

Don't bother bandaging that arm - it was long past time for it to go anyway.

I also think it's funny how the Manager had a life span of about 5 pages.

Machine Man subscriber Felix (#4236)

Location: NZ
Quote: "I'm naked underneath my clothes"
Posted: 6304 days ago

"as fast as mechanically possible"
BRILLIANT! Love it!

Machine Man subscriber Katie Ellert (#207)

Location: Calgary AB Canada
Quote: "Where's Lola? WHERE'S LOLA?!?!"
Posted: 6304 days ago

LOLA!

He has to go back and get her.

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6304 days ago

i'm going to guess it's the aforementioned id card, which by the way makes him above such low actions as being shot at (heh heh), which was left behind, since most male people carry such cards in one's pants/jeans, and i'm not really picturing the contours inside a pair of jeans.

he might also have left the card in his other legs.

unless of course the id card was his betterfuture card, and is hanging from a lanyard rather than tucked in a wallet, in which case disregard the above theory.

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