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I wheeled back into Lola’s room. No change: she was still lying on her side, staring at the window. Actually, not the window: the wall near the window. That was even worse. I wheeled myself around in front of her. “Lola?” Nothing. I moved closer. I felt tense, like she might leap up and bite me. I was still shaky from watching Cassandra Cautery cry in the hallway. That had been a horror movie.

I reached out and touched Lola’s shoulder. Still no reaction. “Lola, it’s okay,” I said. “Everything’s okay.” I began to relax. I stroked her hair for a while. Sometimes I repeated: “Everything’s okay.” I was soothing myself.

Just as I was drifting off, Lola’s hand closed over mine. Our eyes met. She was the person I knew again. Before I could even think to bring it up, she said, “I need to tell you about my heart.”

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Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6314 days ago

I swear, I won't string this out any longer.

I mean, much longer.

Machine Man subscriber dabbeljuh (#4114)

Posted: 6314 days ago

Jaja, das sagen sie alle :)

Just wanted to tune in and say that I enjoyed the first 50 pages a lot - it is a great way to start lunch break everyday ~

Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6314 days ago

Thanks Max, I'd really appreciate you getting to the point about her damn heart sometime soon. Mine can't stand the tension any longer, in fact I'm feeling quite fai...

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6314 days ago

so max, we'll know on monday?

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6314 days ago

although i'll give you this - you know how to keep us hooked.
kile the drug dealer who gives away the first bit for free... and knows how to ration the drugs (words) so the addicts (readers) don't gorge themselves and die (get bored)

although i have a feeling that the next page will be "go on..."

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6314 days ago

I really liked the 'I was soothing myself.' part. This, in the Venn would fall in the set Max U great writers.

imho.

Machine Man subscriber CrystalR (#4160)

Posted: 6313 days ago

"It's... it's a sheep's heart. Baaaaaaah."

Machine Man subscriber Chemical Rascal (#3964)

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "Don't read this. It's not relevant to anything. Go away."
Posted: 6313 days ago

gStein - The question is, _which_ Monday? :P

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6313 days ago

They're wising up.

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