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Machine Man (serial)
CHAPTER TEN

“This is really unfortunate,” said Cassandra Cautery. “I feel terrible about this.”

I couldn’t see her. I was having trouble opening my eyes. They had sedated me, back at the cafe, while I was watching Lola Banks. While I was transfixed by the opening and closing of her mouth, the slowly spreading shock and fear on her face, someone had jabbed a needle in my arm. My veins filled with chemicals as Lola’s fingers described a slow arc through the air, terminating at the deep red flower that blossomed beneath her yellow dress.

“What we need now,” said Cassandra Cautery, “is just to take a few deep breaths.”

My right eyelid peeled open. My left was still gummed up, but I could see a blob where her face must be, framed by watery blonde hair. Beyond that was a nondescript ceiling. I could have been anywhere. But I wasn’t. I was at work.

“Would you like some water?” she said. “I bet you’re thirsty.”

Lola had reached for me. I had tried to catch her, but my legs wouldn’t move. They were inert. They were anchors. I strained, and Lola fell to the floor in front of me.

“I think there’s been some miscommunication on both sides,” said Cassandra Cautery. “I think there are some real lessons to be learned.”

Lola, I croaked. Cassandra Cautery leaned closer. I don’t think she heard me. But she knew what I meant.

“It’s understandable you’re upset, Charlie. I’d be upset, in your place. But please bear in mind: this was a high-pressure situation. Our people were forced into split-second decisions.”

“Lola.” This time it was a real word. My left eye fluttered open. In a minute, I would be able to sit up. Shortly after that, I would be able to get my hand around Cassandra Cautery’s tiny neck and squeeze some answers out of her.

“It’s the unknown,” she said. “It scares people. Makes everyone think worst-case. All this could have been avoided, if only there had been full disclosure.”

I managed to co-ordinate an arm and levered myself up. I was in a medical room. It was small and windowless. The walls were a pale, nostalgic blue. I could smell something acrid and unforgiving, like detergent. Or maybe that was Cautery.

“With that in mind,” she said, “I’d like to figure out why your girlfriend has a metal heart.”

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Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6325 days ago

I was here. ;)

Cassandra is cold. I thought it was funny that she was compaired to detergent. Honestly though, I thought Lola would either survive miraculously or Charlie would be told to make her a metal heart to cover it up. I am happy she seems to be living but it didnt suprise me too much. Still the last line was kinda funny, I thought.

I can picture that now, some top personnel poorly feigning greivance to win over their charge and coming off extremely cold. Then, out of nowhere, a chicken everyone was previously unaware of jumps out from under the table causing the top personnel to say, "WTF?"

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6324 days ago

Whoa, this page totally got posted too early.

Machine Man subscriber Alex (#237)

Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature"
Posted: 6323 days ago

No Max. It's never too early to post our next fix...

Machine Man subscriber Impotent Verse (#3907)

Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 6323 days ago

Grrr! Still on a cliff hanger over Lola surviving getting shot in the heart. I'm guessing she will be okay.

Better Futures knew about Lola's metal heart when she got a security scan back on page 18. I guess Cassandra didn't get that memo, did Carl?

Machine Man subscriber fredzfrog (#2368)

Location: Moe
Quote: "Fredzfrog"
Posted: 6323 days ago

agg! its annoying me that people are picking up points that I forget, then remind me.. thanks :)

Machine Man subscriber Karen (#2180)

Location: wishing I was at home
Quote: "Question authority, not your mother!"
Posted: 6323 days ago

I'm glad I broke down and paid, I didn't know how much I'd miss not getting my page fix everyday - go figure!

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6323 days ago

bon jovi anyone?

Shot through the heart,
And you're to blame
Darling, you give love
A bad name.

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6323 days ago

to tobyO: lololol


Karen, yeah he kinda did a smooth job of reeling us in didnt he.

Alex is right, never too early.

Max, yeah well, its all part of the learning process right? If it was me, I would blame it on that, or my mustache, and feel much better about myself. After which I would settle down with a beer. ;)

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6322 days ago

is this the M. Night Shyamalan twist, where we discover that he isn't the machine man, but lola is the machine [wo]man?

and on another note, are metal (or otherwise mechanical) hearts even possible with today's technology? i know that max likes to set his stories in a universe not 100% unlike our own...

Machine Man subscriber Sandy (#234)

Location: Kansas
Quote: "The stopping of becoming is Nirvana"
Posted: 6322 days ago

could it be related to the old, old song...
"Whatever Lola wants, Lola gets
And little man, little Lola wants you..." :O)

Machine Man subscriber Ian Manka (#3916)

Location: Los Angeles, California (school) | Akron, Ohio (home)
Quote: "Though I am not naturally honest, I am so sometimes by chance."
Posted: 6322 days ago

Hey, cool people. What's up?

Now we can talk about things that no one else that didn't pay for the book can even fathom. [evil laugh]

I really don't have a reaction to this page, nor do I have a prediction for what's going to happen next. I just wanted to re-emphasize how cool we all are.

Machine Man subscriber SilverKnight (#2210)

Location: St. Louis
Posted: 6322 days ago

Same here on the elitism of having purchased, I feel like we should get our money's worth and at least yuck it up about the guy who didn't cough up shoe-cash for the novel!

He sucks. :D

So anyway, still wondering about the metal-heart thing, but I'm keeping silent as to not ruin the moment we found out...

Machine Man subscriber M.I.Minter (#347)

Location: Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA
Quote: "When I read about the evils of drinking, I gave up reading."
Posted: 6321 days ago

@ gStein. yes, metal hearts are real, my buddy Rude had one in Grand Rapids MI before he got the transplant. He was even on an episode of 60 minutes back in 2001 for it.

@ max
I couldn't help but notice that the comments fell off when we had to pay for it. I still believe.

Machine Man subscriber CrystalR (#4160)

Posted: 6318 days ago

Oh god I got a credit card pretty much specifically so I could pay for this. Also, apparently an account. Hi guys!

Machine Man subscriber fellow_autobot (#4303)

Location: brisneyland, straya
Quote: "Max Power, that's the man who's name you'd love to touch, but you musn't touch! That name sounds good in your ear, but when you say it, you musn't fear. Cause that name could be said by anyone! - Homer J Simpson."
Posted: 6250 days ago

i am reminded of 'ramona was a waitress' - by paul dempsey ...

Machine Man subscriber Hyper (#4612)

Location: Texas, USA
Quote: ""A person who won't read has no advantage over one who can't read. " --Mark Twain"
Posted: 6118 days ago

Dangit! I am glad I paid, but think you did too good of a job at making it impossible to refrain from more, Max!

Machine Man subscriber Samisue (#4806)

Location: Mariposa
Quote: ""No one can make you feel inferior without your consent" ~E. Roosevelt"
Posted: 6002 days ago

Wow. Worth my $7. Thanks Max :)

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