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“Brains are plastic,” said Lola. “That’s what we tell people who come in with a foot missing, or hand, or arm. Brains adapt. When you lose a limb, the parts of your brain that were in charge of it, the neurons, they don’t just sit there. Once they figure out they’re not needed, they start roaming around, looking for new jobs. We tell people this because it’s how you can become as mobile on an artificial leg as a real one. Losing a body part frees up resources in your brain that you can apply to something new.

“There was a woman with a transtibial earlier this year, her eyesight improved. A guy swore he got better at math. Some people start smelling colors, or sensing the personality of letters; that’s called synesthesia. It’s why we try to get people into prosthetics as quickly as possible: to capture roaming neurons for motor function before they latch onto something else.”

She shivered. “Carl said his arms had a mind of their own.” Carl still lay in the shadows of the elevator block behind her, wrapped in his mangled sledgehammer arms. “When he took me, he said his arms were talking to him and nobody at Better Future would help. And what I think, Charlie, is that these parts you made, they’re too easy for your brain. You told me once that you don’t need to think about where you step: you tell your Contours where you want to go and they figure out how to get you there. That’s clever, Charlie, that’s the kind of thing you do, but I think you put a lot of neurons out of work.

“And they’ve gone all over. Some, maybe most, went into your subconscious and super-charged it. They raised up areas of your brain that should stay below the surface. That’s what I think happened with Carl. It probably happened to a lot of the test subjects. And you’ve lost a lot more than anybody, Charlie, so I think if anyone’s hearing voices, you are. And the voices, which maybe seem like they’re coming from your parts, they’re actually you.”

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Machine Man subscriber Morlok8k (#4133)

Location: The Moon
Quote: "I like stuff..."
Posted: 6140 days ago

Charlie says, "I'm aware of that... I finally have a friend who treats me well. So what if that friend is just a bunch of microprocessors? I'm no longer alone..."

Max, your section about neurons moving and finding new jobs isn't accurate... In adults at least. Children have a limited ability to reroute neural pathways as they are still growing and building new pathways, but adults lose most of that functionality. If an adult has an amputation, those neurons affected will still be there lying dormant (except in the REM cycles of sleep), and most likely would not adapt new functionality - as all other functionality is sufficiently controlled with the rest of the brain. One minor exception for adults (granted children have more positive results in this scenario) is physical brain damage (wound, stroke, tumor, blood clot, etc.). Depending on the severity and the age of the person, some of the affected functionality can be rerouted to other sections of the brain over time.

Machine Man subscriber Impotent Verse (#3907)

Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 6140 days ago

Charlie's condition:
Post-Bionic Synergy Schizophrenia (PBSS)

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6140 days ago

Whoa, did I just edit yesterday's page? What time is it? I'm confused.

@Morlok8k: That's not what my favorite neuroscience student says. To the journals!

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6140 days ago

Oh, the page must go up on the site an hour before it gets mailed out. I bet that's some kind of daylight savings shenanigans.

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6140 days ago

@Morlok8k: Google University says the idea that adult neurons are inflexible is outdated:

"Brain Rewires Itself After Hand Transplant: Research reveals 'plasticity' of adult neurons"

http://health.usnews.com/articles/health/healthday/2008/10/09/brain-rewires-itself-after-hand-transplant.html

Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6140 days ago

Okay so while Charlie and Lola are discussing the finer points of neurology and brain plasticity in amputated patients our boy Carl's just laying there? But is he dead or alive? Bleeding out or just resting before leaping up to tear Charlie and his migrating brain cells into tiny little bloody pieces? In need of some serious medical attention at the very least surely?

I'm not sure it's believable that before the concrete dust has even settled from Charlie's gunplay Lola would be taking a time out to talk calmly and at length about various amputees and their experiences as well as what Carl went through, etc. And that Charlie would listen to her, that he and his plastic fantastic neurons would stand still for a lecture at this point. I'm having a problem suspending disbelief at this point.

Maybe the neurology stuff needs to come a bit later when Carl's either been put in a body bag or rushed off to the BF hospital or whatever? When the adrenaline level has dropped a wee bit...

Machine Man subscriber Electrichead (#3898)

Location: Toronto
Posted: 6140 days ago

@David: I think Lola is trying to use this talk to stop Charlie from delivering the final blow. Personally, I like it. The guy is very logic-orientated, it makes sense to appeal to that.

Machine Man subscriber Ballotonia (#4030)

Location: Netherlands
Quote: "Vote Early, Vote Often"
Posted: 6140 days ago

Where's the closing quote of the "That's what...
in the first sentence? :p

Overall, I do agree with David, considering the chaotic situation this doesn't strike me as a good moment for a lecture. Still, the reader will need to know this stuff to understand what's going on.

What I see often in movies is that they have a moment early on (people are in a classroom / lecture hall / whatever) where this information is provided, and then at a key moment they merely refer back to that.

Another way, in my very humble opinion... I'm not the writer here so..., to ease into this would've been to start off with Charlie saying he was hearing voices at the bottom of page 170, before Lola said he'd have to get rid of his parts. That way her statement would sound as a logical conclusion to that. Then on this page Charlie could be repeatedly trying to get a clear shot, with Lola trying to get his attention and explaining to him what is happening to him. Carl could twitch a bit, so it's not as if he all of a sudden is 'gone' from the storyline. As it stands now, the atmosphere of this page is academic which doesn't match the emotional drama which IMHO should be taking place. We just came off an 'action-high', after all.

Ballotonia

Machine Man subscriber Yannick (#3858)

Location: Heist, Belgium
Quote: "he reads things"
Posted: 6140 days ago

Well this can really get interesting. I sure hope Charlie doesn't just blindly go with Lola here, I smell some brilliant psychological issues here!

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6139 days ago

@David: Carl is simultaneously dead and alive, a sort of Schrödinger's Carl, if you will.

@Ballotonia: a closing quote isn't needed at the end of a paragraph if the next paragraph is spokenby the same character.

Machine Man subscriber SilverKnight (#2210)

Location: St. Louis
Posted: 6139 days ago

YES! I love it, I love it, I still have chills I love it so much. This page made me climax... literaturely.

Machine Man subscriber Neil (#4050)

Posted: 6137 days ago

Did you make up the bit about amputees developing synaesthesia, or did someone else do some research for you again? I thought it only spontaneously developed after epileptic fits... or maybe strokes...

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