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Machine Man (serial)
CHAPTER THIRTY-FIVE
“Lola! Oh, Lola, Lola, I thought you were move out of the way.” The end of this sentence surprised me. That wasn’t what I had meant to say. “I thought you were dead. I thought Carl killed you.”
“You shot him,” Lola said. It was true. I could see Carl a little better now, and he must have used those metal arms to try to defend himself, because they were battered and torn, but not effectively enough, because so was a lot of his torso. His eyes glittered in the dark. Finish him, said my parts. He’s sneaky.
“Lola, come here.” I held out my arm to Lola, the one that didn’t carry ammunition. “He’s dangerous.”
“He’s not dangerous.”
“He is.” My legs hopped forward, and it took an act of will to reign them in. “He’s been running around trying to kill me. He blew up Better Future. And he kidnapped you.”
Lola shook her head. I was very happy to see Lola alive, but this was rapidly dampening the longer she took to run into my arms. I wasn’t sure what Lola thought was happening here. I wasn’t sure she realized what I had gone through. “Carl didn’t kidnap me. He rescued me.”





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Location: Brisbane, QLD
Quote: "Cante Jondo and The Blues; Popular suffering raised to a high art."
Posted: 6142 days ago
"I thought you were move out of the way."
Happy Monday. :P
Location: Colorado
Quote: "Fiend is like Friend without the "R.""
Posted: 6142 days ago
Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6142 days ago
Location: USA
Quote: "It has been my experience that certain men get ahead during the time that others waste. - Henry Ford"
Posted: 6142 days ago
How can she move out of the way if she is a part of Carl? What's up with Charlie's perception?
Location: London, England
Quote: "We're today's scrambled creatures, locked in tomorrow's double feature"
Posted: 6142 days ago
Poor Charlie. Pwnd by Better Future big time!
Location: new york general sort of vicinity
Quote: ""It's not working" -- Joseph Clark"
Posted: 6142 days ago
Well, now that's resolved...it's just a twisted pile o' wreckage...all 3 characters Carl, Charlie and Lola made up of robotic parts...all checking each other out. No wonder it's messy...visually and grammatically.
Posted: 6142 days ago
Perhaps that's incorrect, but it's easier to discern while reading text without the benefit of William saying it for us.
( How else does a drunk man read cue cards? )
Well, she doesn't know 'Better Future' sees and hears everything, via his new abdomen. So he's about to be shutdown or remotely control him to blast her to protoplasma.
Other thing is, it seems these limbs can function independently. So why exactly are there Cyborg agendas? Ah, the title, 'Machine Man'.
Location: USA
Quote: "It has been my experience that certain men get ahead during the time that others waste. - Henry Ford"
Posted: 6142 days ago
A dash - is the proper grammatical element for indicating a pause or stutter.
Location: Heist, Belgium
Quote: "he reads things"
Posted: 6141 days ago
I think the whole thing is very metonymic for how Charlie perceives the situation, i.e. "wait what?". The lack of any punctuation in mid-sentence perfectly demonstrates that.
I'm actually more worried about Lola's behaviour in all this, I really understand Charlie here.
Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6141 days ago
Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6141 days ago
Location: Massachusetts
Posted: 6141 days ago
also I think it is obvious the artificial intelligence of his parts is becoming a very important part of the story. Thank god Charlie didn't get around to building his mind control helmet before he ran off... (hint hint reccomend something happens with that :) )
Location: Ohio, USA
Quote: "There is a guy in Lab Control who once killed a woman with his car, and he gets invited to parties. I dont understand that."
Posted: 6141 days ago
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Posted: 6141 days ago
Location: USA
Quote: "It has been my experience that certain men get ahead during the time that others waste. - Henry Ford"
Posted: 6141 days ago
"Lola! Oh, Lola, Lola, I thought you were," I started, "move out of the way." The end of this sentence surprised me.
Location: Hobart
Posted: 6141 days ago
He realised the mistake, no need to harp on about how it cnfused you for a millisecond, people!
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