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“Carl found you,” said Cassandra Cautery. One tear after another rolled down her cheek, but otherwise she was very calm. I found that a little disturbing. Of course, I was having a pregnant-looking prosthetic fitted to replace an arm I’d sawn off myself, so it probably worked both ways. “We couldn’t stop him. He stood right here and looked at you.”
“I thought he wanted to kill me.”
“No doubt he figured you were as good as dead. Your arm was hanging off.”
“Still… why not make sure?”
“I don’t know, Charlie. He’s unhinged. I don’t know what he’s thinking. Look, if it bothers you so much, next time you see him, ask what the hell he thinks he’s doing. No, check that. Next time you see him, just kill him.”
“Why don’t you kill him,” I said. “You’re the ones with guns.”
She looked at the metal arm. The two men had aligned it with my shoulder; a third was fooling around near my spine. They strained, and something locked together with a sound like: snack. Cassandra Cautery said, “Actually…”





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Posted: 6166 days ago
Location: Navarre, Ohio
Quote: ""Democracy is the theory that the common man knows what he wants, and deserves to get it good and hard." - H. L. Mencken"
Posted: 6166 days ago
Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 6166 days ago
Location: Calgary, AB, CANADA
Quote: ""It tastes like beef!""
Posted: 6166 days ago
Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6166 days ago
He uses his firearm...
Posted: 6166 days ago
Location: IL
Quote: "You can only be young once. But you can always be immature. - Dave Barry "
Posted: 6166 days ago
I disagree with 'anonymous,' what kind of name is that anyway, that was a great Friffhanger. We all knew something along those lines was coming, but thinking more about it, as a writer to position your story to make sure that Friday comes along with a nice dramatic pause in the plot, well done Max, you should consider TV dramas!
Location: Navarre, Ohio
Quote: ""Democracy is the theory that the common man knows what he wants, and deserves to get it good and hard." - H. L. Mencken"
Posted: 6166 days ago
Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6166 days ago
(i may or may not have been watching too many zombie movies)
Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6165 days ago
@anonymous: yeah dude get a cool name
@C Leffelman: thanks for correcting anonymous' n00b use of cliffhanger.
Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6165 days ago
Think about the sales pitch that would make. Soon the National Guard and then the Army come in to suppress them, but they kick ass anyway battling through Infantry, Humvees, APCs, Tanks and Artillery to come out victorious. "Finally taken down at sunrise on a hilltop and in their dying breath upright the flag they have with them and declare their superiority" like in the Warhammer (cant remember which episode) video game opening sequence.
Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6165 days ago
not the proper place to post but it just came to me and I cant resist. (sorry for the string posts)
Max Barry: he writes things
Max Barry: fear his vigilantes
Max Barry: lol omg he i so 1337
how about this one
Max Barry... still bald.
Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6164 days ago
I just realised something... Carl is using BF products, did they really not think to install remote shut down in case the prototype became unstable?
I'm really hoping the arm is a soda gun, with the syrup and carbonation carried like a Camelbak.
This'd help get to @Ben's idea, which I agree with.
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