Machine Man
Previous Page

Get the Machine Man serial

1 page per day — the way it was meant to be

Next Page
Page 153.
Machine Man (serial)

“Carl found you,” said Cassandra Cautery. One tear after another rolled down her cheek, but otherwise she was very calm. I found that a little disturbing. Of course, I was having a pregnant-looking prosthetic fitted to replace an arm I’d sawn off myself, so it probably worked both ways. “We couldn’t stop him. He stood right here and looked at you.”

“I thought he wanted to kill me.”

“No doubt he figured you were as good as dead. Your arm was hanging off.”

“Still… why not make sure?”

“I don’t know, Charlie. He’s unhinged. I don’t know what he’s thinking. Look, if it bothers you so much, next time you see him, ask what the hell he thinks he’s doing. No, check that. Next time you see him, just kill him.”

“Why don’t you kill him,” I said. “You’re the ones with guns.”

She looked at the metal arm. The two men had aligned it with my shoulder; a third was fooling around near my spine. They strained, and something locked together with a sound like: snack. Cassandra Cautery said, “Actually…”

153.

Next Page
Previous Page

Comments

This is where site members post comments. If you're not a member, you can join here. There are all kinds of benefits, including moral superiority!

Machine Man subscriber Isaac (#4089)

Posted: 6166 days ago

=-D

Machine Man subscriber SexCpotatoes (#2188)

Location: Navarre, Ohio
Quote: ""Democracy is the theory that the common man knows what he wants, and deserves to get it good and hard." - H. L. Mencken"
Posted: 6166 days ago

They've tried to kill him, either the arms have some sort of defensive systems that can deflect/magnetize/ricochet bullets, or everyone in the story (cops + security, because he had to have already run into cops on his rampage outside of Better Future) are ridiculously lousy shots.

Machine Man subscriber Impotent Verse (#3907)

Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 6166 days ago

Nerds + Guns = ?

Machine Man subscriber regtiangha (#4080)

Location: Calgary, AB, CANADA
Quote: ""It tastes like beef!""
Posted: 6166 days ago

"Actually...you ARE the gun"

Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6166 days ago

How does a cyborg keep you warm at night?

He uses his firearm...

Machine Man subscriber Ziggie (#4067)

Posted: 6166 days ago

So...not the best weekend cliffhanger. Obviously they're installing a nanomolecular assembler as his arm that can morph into whatever he can imagine (and sign? I guess he has to send the commands somehow).

Machine Man subscriber C Leffelman (#3968)

Location: IL
Quote: "You can only be young once. But you can always be immature. - Dave Barry "
Posted: 6166 days ago

@ David, nice, I feel like I've read that on a popsicle stick, haha.

I disagree with 'anonymous,' what kind of name is that anyway, that was a great Friffhanger. We all knew something along those lines was coming, but thinking more about it, as a writer to position your story to make sure that Friday comes along with a nice dramatic pause in the plot, well done Max, you should consider TV dramas!

Machine Man subscriber SexCpotatoes (#2188)

Location: Navarre, Ohio
Quote: ""Democracy is the theory that the common man knows what he wants, and deserves to get it good and hard." - H. L. Mencken"
Posted: 6166 days ago

@ C Leffelman, I disagree, as Max considering TV dramas would be silly. It's fine to come up with one Friffhanger a week, but would probably be agonizing trying to come up with one for each and every goddamned commercial break.

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6166 days ago

i was hoping for chainsaw arm :/
(i may or may not have been watching too many zombie movies)

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6165 days ago

@gStein: Bruce Campbell movies you mean.

@anonymous: yeah dude get a cool name

@C Leffelman: thanks for correcting anonymous' n00b use of cliffhanger.

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6165 days ago

I want Charlie to team up with Carl. Screw the terminator vs terminator build up thats happening. I want to see teh Wolverine/Sabretooth style pairing. They hate each other but fight together anyway because "Noone but me kills/hurts him."

Think about the sales pitch that would make. Soon the National Guard and then the Army come in to suppress them, but they kick ass anyway battling through Infantry, Humvees, APCs, Tanks and Artillery to come out victorious. "Finally taken down at sunrise on a hilltop and in their dying breath upright the flag they have with them and declare their superiority" like in the Warhammer (cant remember which episode) video game opening sequence.

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6165 days ago

LOL
not the proper place to post but it just came to me and I cant resist. (sorry for the string posts)

Max Barry: he writes things
Max Barry: fear his vigilantes
Max Barry: lol omg he i so 1337

how about this one

Max Barry... still bald.

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6164 days ago

i have to say i'm enjoying the onomatopoeia.

I just realised something... Carl is using BF products, did they really not think to install remote shut down in case the prototype became unstable?

I'm really hoping the arm is a soda gun, with the syrup and carbonation carried like a Camelbak.

This'd help get to @Ben's idea, which I agree with.

To post a comment, login or sign up!

Next Page
Previous Page