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I raised my head. I was in an operating theater. Of course I was: I had been brought here for surgery. But things lay scattered and overturned: a trolley, drip stands, equipment that looked like someone should be keeping it sterile. Surgical blades glimmered from the floor tiles in rapidly pooling water, like coins in a wishing well. There was a chunk out of the doorway and a long crack running up the wall. I thought: Earthquake?

I heard the coughing again. I planted my right hand on the table and levered myself up with my left elbow, to see who this was, but it didn’t work. I looked down to see what the problem was, and realized: I was in serious trouble.

Blood pumped enthusiastically from a gash in my left shoulder. No, gash was the wrong word. That implies a cut in something that is mostly whole. This was the opposite. I had a thin chunk of skin and muscle connecting me an arm that was otherwise severed. On the tiles, as if discarded there, was something I had mistaken for a drill. But it wasn’t: it had a long, flat blade. It was a saw. Liquid red ribbons threaded the water around it. I had been brought in for surgery. They had not finished. But they had started.

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Machine Man subscriber fredzfrog (#2368)

Location: Moe
Quote: "Fredzfrog"
Posted: 6176 days ago

stupid daylight savings.. I have to wait an extra hour for my mm fix! :(

anyhoo.. so its all turned into a carl-amity?

Machine Man subscriber Stuk (#4278)

Location: UK
Posted: 6176 days ago

Oooooo, my excitement's building! If only there was another page to turn!

Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6176 days ago

Carlus interuptus presumably. Now this is going to be a tough one for our boy to get out of. Can't wait to see how he avoids death, assuming he does of course...

Machine Man subscriber Charles Thiesen (#3)

Location: Dorchester, MA
Quote: "Never put off till tomorrow what you can put off till the day after tomorrw."
Posted: 6176 days ago

Oh.My.God.

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6176 days ago

Any chance that Max would do something totally unexpected, like kill off the main character halfway through the story?

Machine Man subscriber Alan W (#1427)

Location: Spokane, Washington
Quote: "Corgis are like potato chips"
Posted: 6176 days ago

It's amazing he's still alive, I thought they had to reverse anastesia, he would never have woken up, just bled out.

Machine Man subscriber IpHa (#4118)

Posted: 6176 days ago

@Alan

Anesthetics wear off on their own fairly quickly, so unless you were given a single large dose rather than an IV you'll be awake in a about 10-20 minutes.

Machine Man subscriber CrystalR (#4160)

Posted: 6176 days ago

The first cut is the deepest, baby I know
The first cut is the deepest

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6176 days ago

Dude, this guy is boned. Even if he survives the best he can hope for is some to take pity on his ass and put it out of its misery... Then perhaps they do the rest of his body parts too, he is like a piece of meccano at this point, the alive part is just a new feature.

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6175 days ago

@Ben: you forget that this is a science fiction story

Machine Man subscriber Max

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 6175 days ago

Rescue by aliens?

P.S. The number of puns in the comments is getting OUT OF CONTROL. I really have to hand it to you guys.

Machine Man subscriber Missy (#4594)

Location: Oregon
Quote: "I love cake and champage!"
Posted: 5980 days ago

"I had a thin chunk of skin and muscle connecting me an arm that was otherwise severed." I keep trying and trying to make this sentence make sense to me, and it just isn't. Is the word TO missing? "...connecting me TO an arm..." ? If this is supposed to read this way, I don't like it ;)

Machine Man subscriber Michael (#4897)

Location: Morgantown, WV USA
Quote: "We're made of star stuff - Sagan"
Posted: 5921 days ago

"I had a thin chunk of skin and muscle connecting me an arm that was otherwise severed."

Need to add "to" between "me" and "an arm"

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