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Machine Man (serial)
CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE

I woke happy. It was dark. I didn’t know where I was. But I had come from a wonderful dream, in which I held hands with Lola and we were safe. I lay still, not wanting to disturb this bliss. But even when reality began to filter in, bringing with it complications like the fact that I was being pursued by a vengeful security guard with multifunction sledgehammer arms, things didn’t seem so bad. My problems weren’t more significant than the miracle of Lola telling Angelica last night: I love him. If I had Lola, everything else was solvable: I felt this very strongly. She was my independent variable.

On the ceiling above my head was a poster of a dinosaur. I sat up. There were dinosaur pictures everywhere. In one corner, toy trucks overflowed from a basket. This was a kid’s room. In fact, now I looked at it, this was a small bed. It was very small. Which meant—

I was not wearing my legs.

My toes went first: spasmed, locked. My foot curled back on itself. My calves turned to screaming steel and the fact that none of this was real made any difference. I threw back the covers and frantically massaged the space where my shrieking muscles would be, but I knew it would do no good without the Contours, and was right. Tears streamed from my eyes. The painkillers have worn off, my brain whispered. It will hurt so much worse now.

“My legs!” I screamed. “I need my legs!

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Machine Man subscriber Chemical Rascal (#3964)

Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "Don't read this. It's not relevant to anything. Go away."
Posted: 6228 days ago

I'm not to sure describing one's love interest as an independent variable is a good thing... I must say, though, that I did almost snigger at Charlie's new plight.

I'm such a sadist.

Machine Man subscriber Impotent Verse (#3907)

Location: Cambridge, UK
Quote: "On the internet, nobody knows you're a dog"
Posted: 6228 days ago

When Charlie comes up with a pet name for Lola e.g. Sex Poodle or Boo Boo Kitty ...., Will that make her his metasyntactic variable?

Man, that was poor.

Machine Man subscriber Toby O (#2900)

Location: Sydney
Quote: "vote with your wallet"
Posted: 6228 days ago

Still picturing
http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0001431/
In the title role.

Machine Man subscriber Ballotonia (#4030)

Location: Netherlands
Quote: "Vote Early, Vote Often"
Posted: 6228 days ago

I'm stumbling on "... and the fact that none of this was real made any difference." I would expect "didn't make any difference." or "made a difference."

Storyline-wise, I thought he'd be missing another part of his body as well now. An arm or so. :D

Ballotonia

Machine Man subscriber Kyle McAuliffe (#4257)

Location: Tokyo
Quote: "Once I cashed a paycheck and I realized it wasn't enough. Once I had food poisoning, and realized I was trapped inside my body."
Posted: 6228 days ago

I loved that independent variable line.

Machine Man subscriber gstein42 (#585)

Location: 127.0.0.1
Quote: "That's not change! That's more of the same!"
Posted: 6227 days ago

@Toby O: i think Newman is a bit... big to be charlie

Machine Man subscriber CrystalR (#4160)

Posted: 6227 days ago

gStein; I was imagining Charlie to be a little overweight. He has body issues, and doesn't seem to be the kind of person to frequent a gym. He doesn't seem to believe that flesh can be improved, so he wouldn't reallly make the effort.

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