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Lola was silent as the elevator descended. I risked a glance at her: she was staring straight ahead, her arms stiff. “Well,” I said. “Do you think this elevator really takes us to the parking lot, or is it a trap?”

Lola said nothing.

I cleared my throat. “When the doors open—”

“Did you take away Carl’s arms?”

“I don’t think now is the best time to discuss this.”

Did you make them take his arms?

“They weren’t his arms!” I had more to this argument, but Lola’s lips thinned to a dramatic slash, and I decided it would be counter-productive to advance any further. “Let’s talk about this later.”

The elevator thumped to a stop. The doors seemed to take a long time to open. Lola said, “I’m very disappointed, Charlie.”

“Okay.” I held out my arms. “Come here.” Her expression became alarming, so I added, “There’s probably going to be some running. I need to carry you.”

The doors slid apart. It took my eyes a moment to adjust to the contrast: the darkness of the parking lot against the rectangle of briliant sunlight pouring down the ramp. The shouting was clear enough, though: phrases like there he is and take him.

Lola jumped into my arms. Then there was some running.

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Machine Man subscriber dabbeljuh (#4114)

Posted: 6240 days ago

brilliant ~

there was some running :)

Machine Man subscriber David (#1456)

Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 6240 days ago

That'll teach her. If Charlie hadn't taken Carl's arms she'd have had nothing to jump into when the running, and the jumping and the bullet dodging, was required. Women.

Machine Man subscriber Ben (#3924)

Location: Alberta, Canada
Quote: "I don't wanna ride the elevator."
Posted: 6240 days ago

I don't remember much, a talking brick wall with arms, an elevator, some running...

lol, my girlfriend asked me why I was laughing when I read that last bit.

Machine Man subscriber Electrichead (#3898)

Location: Toronto
Posted: 6238 days ago

I don't think you noticed max, but I think there's there's a typo in 'briliant' the "The doors slid apart" paragraph. dabbeljuh might have been pointing it out; then again maybe he was just saying the page was brilliant!

Machine Man subscriber Hengehog (#4574)

Location: Minnesota
Posted: 6058 days ago

Are his eyes next? Every time he has criticized parts of his body he replaces things.
(yes I know I am reading this late)

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